Reviews for Like Grains of Sand in the Hourglass |
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Guest chapter 9 . 1/8/2023 Plot hole: why not send a patronus to Sirius first? |
Shadeymankey chapter 9 . 12/19/2022 Honestly not sure why you wrote this if you don’t let her ACTUALLY change much |
python73 chapter 12 . 12/16/2022 Solid, enjoyable Honks. Despite slightly TML (too much Luna). Probably would be my favorite Honks fic if it wasn't for that cheesy brain_worm of a fic where Tonks gets Harry to join the Unspeakables. This is CLEARLY better written and better beta'd. Thanks! |
Freddie Rindklip chapter 12 . 11/21/2022 I finally started reading more than just Harmony. It was my loss. Thank you for the good read. |
ElementalMaster16 chapter 12 . 11/15/2022 An absolute pleasure to read this story. I really love the development of Dora, it was a very well done series of internal struggles. I look forward to reading the next part of the saga. |
Re Lovely Lover chapter 12 . 9/23/2022 The setup was there and repeated hints at the 3 ending up together but just stops before it actually does or the story is done. So frustrating. Great story and I'm happy that it was at least hinted the 3 end up together. Still quite bothered about the Ron and Luna thing. |
Re Lovely Lover chapter 6 . 9/22/2022 Still bummed this doesnt end with the 3 of them together with eachother |
Re Lovely Lover chapter 4 . 9/22/2022 I hate that in these versions no one makes a big deal and goes to the town or even wizemgot and has Harry show the memories in a pensive or under truth serum depending. Work around fudge and show how hes helping britain itself commit suicide by not only doing nothing but weakening its ability to defend itself. Sad it's not Tonks and Hermione. She more or less stuck with him through it all and risked her life time and again. Just too awkward to make the move herself. This chapter with that part was just depressing. Howlers stopped the grouping but no one said anything to the parents about Blood Quills? I'm sorry but wtf? Luna interested in Ron? Or just thinking. Eh.. no thanks on the first one. |
Re Lovely Lover chapter 3 . 9/22/2022 Only other option I can think up is going international. Informing the ICW and other such papers of everything to force scrutiny on the minister and get Amelia room to work. Adding in memories from a pensive from Harry like Tonks mentioned doing herself if she got diet on Umbridge. Fudge is also scared of appearances and the like. Which means she could get the families to act kick up a fuss. |
JuliusCorvinus chapter 12 . 9/6/2022 thanks for writing Like Grains of Sand in the Hourglass |
odonnellzoo99 chapter 12 . 8/29/2022 I liked this a lot. Not a fan of angst, but what was here made sense for the story. Thank you for sharing your creativity. |
LexCrowne chapter 4 . 8/18/2022 I rather think gobbledygook is an *excilent* name for the goblin language in *English*, especially as used by modern wizards. It is after all, not what the goblins call their own language in their own tongue, potentially not what it was galled hundreds of years ago, and only reinforces just how racist the wizards are to name the language something so demeaning. |
RedOuroboros chapter 12 . 8/3/2022 great story, it could have ended here really very good we assume all things turn out in the end :) |
RedOuroboros chapter 10 . 8/3/2022 remus- meh :) love the story |
RedOuroboros chapter 4 . 8/3/2022 pretty sure, at least in my head cannon, Gobbledegook is what the Wizards call it, the goblins call it something else, love the chinese swear words thanks for the chapter great story |