Finnish it

Are you gonna continue it ik I’m probably late but I would love to keep reading this story I don’t know if it’s a error on my part but I don’t see anymore chapters please continue it if you haven’t it’s a great first chapter ️

Bro come on and update this. This story can be amazing. Just update this.

This was adorable

sigh i really wish you were continueing this. I just set my self up for disappointment when I clicked on it and realized that it will not be continued. why you got to play with my emotion like that. lol

You have amazing writing skills, better than mine so I have no idea what to comment about, but other than the funny things, maybe a little reminiscing and maybe a but of ptsd that never happened on the island since it was... quite peaceful, unless you say otherwise.

Just some suggestions, I don’t think you have much to do about your writing style.

This shit is lit dude! You gotta follow up!

Why only one chapter

I'll follow this story cause I still belive it's not abandoned. I love it

I need more god dammit .
also deos tihs annoy ur gramer nazi syndrome.

This is a really well done fanfic and I hope you keep up the good work

Please continue the story this is awesome stuff

Much amaze I love it. Pls makes the rest

This is great.I hope you continue this . Plese do ,BTW I really like your writing style.

A good combination of writing styles liked this chapter waiting for more.