Don't take it down for heaven's sake, it is fine! You established that which needed to be established, let us know that despite everyhting, Harry regretted nothing, and Holy Shit (pardon me, but seriously) did you insinuate a bomb? Am i correct, was Snape sent to keep a watch over Harry as Jason? Da Da Dum, is Snape the father of Harry's baby? What a plot twist, I totally didn't expect it, of course I could be reading the wrong things into the conversation between Albus and Severus, still. although it was very subtle (artful, really) am I right? or just random and paranoid? Loved the initial scene with Snape (would have liked an actual hand to help more). I definitely want you to keep up an easy, kidding, camrauderie between the Harry, Ron, Hermione, Draco, Blaise set- it is that kind of funny, conversational/relational backdrop that makes a good story great! Dialogue is key.

Anyway, great job, I am so glad you updated, I was worried you had abandoned it (don't)- I want more,

more and soon!

Shocked, slightly confused, and loving every minute of it,

V

Fantastic! Thanks! _~

I just typed a review, & now it looks as though 'the entity' ate it instead of posting it!Arrgghh!

I Reaaly like this chapter!

Does bring to mind Many questions, tho':

1) Does Sev know? He seems to be closely watching & protecting Harry.

2) Is "Jason" really the father? Is that a different name, & even Harry doesn't know the true identity? or

3) Is he really Not a muggle? I know that different fics use different theories, but typically, the line is that for a make to get pregnant, Both fathers Need to be Powerful wizards. Not even 'average' , for Harry to be so upset, "You knew I was a wizard.", well, a muggle would not necessarily have had the sense of that even if told repeatedly! Is he something else entirely, not a muggle, but not a wizard ?

I am really intrigued by this. Please update soonest!

*sobs* you can't take it down. And you have to keep on writing it. A very good chapter by the way.

*innocent look* Is it going to be HP/SS slash later on by any chance? *g*

Ayame: Hey Vi, don't take down the chapter. It was great. Also that is ok. I don't mind. Been busy as it is.

Celina: yeah she has.

Ayame; oh I would like to introduce Celina, my new roommate. Only an over enthusicastic Werewolf. Amazed I haven't killed her yet.

Celina: you wouldn't do anything to me.

Ayame: I wouldn't be so sure about that.

Celina: *sticks her tongue out*

Ayame: ignore her. So wanted to say great chapter, can't wait for the next one. Also you need to update Blood is thicker than Ne

Wonderful Chapter. Keep it up, nothing wrong with it at all. Good job.

I've just found your story. It's a nice one.

After reading the second chapter, I have a hunch that Jason is really .Snape.

I got this conclusion from some hints in the second chapter:

1. WHY Snape help Harry before he falls

2. Dumbledore sounds happy when he asks Snape about his summer

3. Dumbledore sounds very surprise about the father of the baby

Anymore hints?

So write some more and prove I'm wrong.

But if I'm right, I'm so happy!

Because I like HP/SS story.

Keep updating

WM

No don't its really great! a very nice story with a great start .. keep up the great work..

dhiana

dhiana

No! That's so cruel! More!

Far be it from me to thwart anyone from fulfilling doctor's orders. Ergo, here is my review:

EXCELLENT.! Please don't wait too long to continue. I really like how this has started.

I don't believe I have seen anything quite like this one before.

Please, have no doubts about the merit of this story. I has wonderful potential. There are so many directions you could take with it.

Thank you

I love it! When ya gonna update? *grins* Please update this soon! Its awful of you to keep us hanging so long!

Meep! I love it! It's brilliant. I love angst, for one, and the idea of Harry having to go through pregnancy all alone is so sad and original, I can't resist. Do continue - when you can, that is.

ps: It's me, Sal. ;D

I love it! It's so grand! Please, please, please, please write more as soon as possiable. :D I really do love it! But will Harry be getting back with Jason, or will he get with someone else? And it's really weird that I am reading this, cause I'm a Harry/Draco slasher to the bone! Anyways my two cents/sense. Later

Ah.I was so happy when I saw you had written something new. This is good. It has potiental. Keep on else *evil glare*

Interesting, I definitely want more (update, please)

I like your Draco, loved the scene in the carriage (very touching, with Blaise, Hermione, etc.)

Anyway, you should definitely write more, soon :)

I also like your other story with the Young ..Seven

V