It's great!It's wonderful!Keep writing,it's going to turn out great i bet!

Please please please continue this soon. I heard about it on the mpreg yahoo group and had to come over for a visit. I'm glad I did. :)

I'm liking this story! yes yes yes!

this is a great story. i can't wait to find out what happens next. what is your web sites adress i am thinking about checking it out. hope to hear from you soon.

lexy

oh my god this is such a good fic, please write more, i can't wait to see how you bring sev into this

I like the story, but I'd prefer if it were a HP/SS pairing...esp. since the other was after a bit, trying to tell Harry more, but he wouldn't listen...maybe Sev'd work it out, wooing Harry back. I'm a romantic, & would prefer to see happy endings!

plz continue... It's a very good story... *starts to beg like a dog on all fours and lifts uf little puppy eyes*...

*~*oneofakindwerewolf*~*

Ayame: this is a good story Vi. You do need to get in touch with me though. If we are ever going to sort through your mind and help with all the stories stored up there.

Draco: *still trying to get used to the fangs* yeah. Just tell us.

Ayame: think of it this way. Once a week I need to sit down and sort through all the idea's in my head, so I don't accidentally put stuff for one story in another.

Draco: true, but I help.

Ayame: so does Harry, that is one thing he is good for.

Harry: HEY!

Ayame: *shakes head* well this is a good start. Ja Ne

This was great. Really really great. I can't wait to see where this is heading! Please continue the story!

have you considered posting it on the Mpreg Yahoogroup? Could ensure you lots more feedback...

so is the kid really fathered by the muggle or is harry covering up for somebody? and please do continue this, i'm amused.

Just thought I'd add my 2 cents/encouragement; your plot premise is very intresting, not to mention somewhat unique ( at least to me, given the mpregs I've read). Also your characterization of Harry is pretty well done, just beware overuse of hormone indused personality changes. All in all, it seemes like it will continue to be a good fic. Hope you keep writing & that this has satisfied a bit of that tortureious need for reviews.

'Sephone.

I've never reviewed for 'anyone' on before...I rarely even 'visit' this site at all...but I did because you were recced on the mpreg list and I'm writing this review because your story is just 'that' promising. Please don't let it languish! I know exactly what it is like to have other fics going on and to not have time, but please...make the time! I'm in the same boat that you are. Someone should make a wip author's support group! : )

Nikita

nikita_slash

Good fic. _ more please _

This story is really good, different than all the other mpregs out there. you should definately continue it! I can't wait to see where it goes from here!

i like it is different can't wait till there is more.