Reviews for The Last Mage Of Krypton |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So we're not going to talk about how a troll survived being punched through two walls and only got knocked out cold? |
![]() ![]() Poor Arthur. :) Love this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omfg that opening that would have been so much better then the original |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very entertaining and absolutely endearing story. Your take on the characters was brilliantly thought out as was the plot. Thank you for sharing this with us! I'll directly jump on the sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 5% of what? Such a nonsense answer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really stupid turn of events. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope this Harry realizes what a prick Dumbledore is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() afuckingmazing pacing for the prestory |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok i understand that Kryptonian’s dont have a resistance to magic in canon DC, but it makes NO sense for Harry to have the weakness, being a magical, that feels like something you ignored just to allow situations to happen in the plot |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* why do you have to skip over the important shit, i wanted to see the stuff at gringotts, i wanted to see the sorting, its no fun if you just throw away everything important |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() As this was a twin project, my guess is that it's a binary potion. The final step to make the potion work is combining two mixtures. One's in the shampoo and the other's in the conditioner. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if anyone's really noted that the pattern of five bricks tapped is marking the points of a pentagram on that wall? |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEADBASTARDS MUST DIE. |
![]() ![]() Lol Harry sounds thirty and doesn't act like a kid at all. He's supposed to be eleven, no matter how strong he is. And all the exposition that feels extremely out of place with clear intent as to why, like the whole handshake thing, which is a massively overused trope. Poor draco, the little nazi boy didn't get his handshake lol. I like the premise of this fic alot, but the execution is kinda shakey. Hope the writing improves. |