|Reviews for In the Mines of Moria|
| 8I chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
This one made me giggle several times throughout it! Comedy is hard, but you are good at it!
The pacing in this one felt a little rushed to me. Maybe that's the only way it works, but still, it felt a little weird. Funny, though!
| Lil' Miss Spookiness chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
“Why did you leave me there?” he roared at Aragorn and Boromir, who ceased their struggle of a thick branch Boromir had tried to hit Gimli with. Aragorn had already disarmed him of the shield, the sword, several smaller rocks, and Pippin.
it was all gold, so funny
| Valinor Sunset chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Lol. That is funny.
“We should now decide what to do. It seems that Legolas has killed Gandalf,” began Aragorn.
Oops... my mistake. :P
| Gaslight chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
This was tremendously silly and utterly hilarious. :D My most favorite definition (that you will never see in a dictionary) is:
a sexually focused chronologically gifted individual (dirty old man). LOL!
Thanks for reviewing my Lurtz manual! I also believe in the commandment of Review and Thee Shall Be Reviewed Also. ;)
| edgy wedgy chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
That was nice, I liked it! Extremely clever.
AND WHY WON'T YOU LET ME REVIEW? I LIKE your stories! And I swear not to waste your space!
| PrincessEilonwy chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
All right, that was really strange but really funny. What's "THE END-or is it?" mean? Will there be more? Will Gandalf come back to life? Will Legolas ever learn how to use idioms? Come on, you have to answer these questions!
| Gypsie Rose chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
That was very silly! I don't know how I missed this one before. My biggest laugh was probably here: "Aragorn and Boromir looked at each other, looked down and quickly turned away. Though the others did not have a visual, they could see that both Men were frantically struggling with their undergarments."
Although this one is an extremely close second:
"I hear them. The drums. The drums of the enemy.”
“We are fighting against musicians?” inquired Pippin, perplexed.
And the true story of Gandalf's death ... oh dear!
| Oddwen Floddball chapter 1 . 7/1/2003
Lawks! *collapses giggling* That's the funniest thing I've read in a long time! I'll never listen to "Fly, you fools!" the same way again. *snork*
I especially liked Gimli and Boromir and Aragorn, and Legolas, and Pippin, and Merry, Sam, Frodo, Gandalf, heck that's all of 'em.
Great story! :D
| leggy-stinks chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
OMG! This is such a great fic! I was laughing so hard the whole time! But it took me SO long to understand the part about "i said, fly". I was like, "did I miss something here?" And then Aragorn and Boromir were looking at their undergarments, and I was like "what's going on here? I swear I missed something." And then I thought about it and thought about it...and thought about it some more...and then finally, i was like "OH!" And then I started laughing my head off cuz it was so funny (and of course cuz I was so stupid for not realizing what it meant the first time _). And idiot Legolas...that was just great! And Pippin's "idiots with idioms result idiotism"...LOL! :) Well, as you can see, I enjoyed this fic a WHOLE lot! You are a great, GREAT writer, and this is a great, GREAT fic! :)
| T.H.W chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
BWAHA! This was great! Omygosh! Hold on, lemme catch my breath...okay. That was SO good! Really great! I loved the part when Gandalf came back and he was like, "WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME THERE?" And they were just like, "Er, you told us to."
"Fools! Cursed fools! I said nothing about leaving. I said 'fly' to you gentlemen, as a simple observation." Aragorn and Boromir looked at each other, looked down and quickly turned away. Though the others did not have a visual, they could see that both Men were frantically struggling with their lower garments."
LOLOLOL! Great! Omygosh, I was laughing SO hard! Thank goodness I'm alone in the house. Some people might think I'm going mad. :-D I especially loved it when Legolas was "Shooting the breeze." This was GREAT! You should write more like this! Lol!
| midnight dystopia chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
Satu! Have I mentioned that I like this fic? *chuckles* I like this fic. It's light and humorous, and well done. I'm definately looking forward to more, and hey, I reviewed! *is proud of self*
The best part would have to be Legolas shooting at the breeze- OH LORDY! With Elves, no idioms, EVER.
| Snuffles2 chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
What the hell? How did I not put a reveiw when I read this the first time? O_o
*giggles insanely* You should write more humor! More! More! _ *goes off giggling about "with elves, no idioms" and the last paragraph*
| Lizlego chapter 1 . 4/3/2003
Hey Salysha! Oh my God! How did I skip this one earlier? This is an awesome fic. Can you lend me your English skills as well? Gandalf was a dirty old man and it was really FOLLY to go to MORIA! LOL! I suggest you add a new chapter. Maybe a comeback of Dirty ol' man?
| Jessie-Greenleaf chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
Wow! That was...odd. Stupid Gimli! Couldn't Legolas have killed him instead? Heehee. Even though this story was a bit...strange, it was good! Your a great author, I hope you decide to put up another chapter!
| Werecat99 chapter 1 . 3/24/2003
That was great! Funniest fic I've read in ages! Gandalf the Black was an inspired concept.