I love this so much! I have read many Narnian fics with the same main idea as this, but this by far the most realistic one. Please, please, please update!

this is by far the best portal fic I have ever read. I really hope it gets updated soon

Update?

Hey there,
I know, it's a long time and you probably won't even read this, but if you ever could be interestet in continuing this story, I would be absolutely happy. I've read a few Narnia to England fics, but - honestly - your's the best! I'd love to read more but I can entirely understand if you just want to forget this, I've done it myself often enough...
My best wishes in this times for you,
Lou

Continuar a história

Oh my god... why a cliffhanger!? I would really really love to know what happens next! Please tell me this hasn’t been abandoned yet! Please?

Ugh I hate that you haven’t updated in like three years boooooooooooooo
Really good writing keep up the good work

This is so good I love the stories that have Narnia come to England I really hope you are still writing because I would love to read some more

God, I love this story so freaking much. The idea is literally perfect and I adore how well you’ve written the characters and the story. I really hope you are still writing this as it’s honestly amazing. Well done

please update the story again soon. I would love to know what happens next...

wish this continued! really enjoyed it.

Please update! I really want to know what happens next!

I really enjoyed the story, but I would love to know what happens next... Please update again soon...

I'm pretty excited for this story! Are you still working on it? This scenario is one I've often wondered about, since Tirian was able to "visit" for that brief time in The Last Battle. Anyway, this is the first Narnia fic I've ever read that draws on this possibility, so I'm quite happy to read whatever you've got :)

I really like how you've delved into what it must have been like for the Pevensies to go back to being kids in England again, and how Susan might have drifted away from the others. No doubt to her, clinging to the Narnia "game" would hinder her from joining the real world to the fullest, when in reality it was meant to teach her how to live her life in the real world to the fullest. How sad for Lucy that Susan's disdain for the "game" has led her to treat her sister poorly as well. Lucy's determination to cling to the truth is as strong as ever.

And here's the portal... I wonder what it'll all be about! And yes, I'm sure its appearance right by her school, right when she happens to be out in the woods, is no coincidence ;)

Good start! I'm looking forward to reading more when I can.

Please update