Reviews for Shadows
DarkChampion chapter 4 . 5/2
I had Hope's for this. But now I dont have much hope for those "novels" you write. This has turned from something that had potential, albeit with bad naming conventions. To just another c rated porn without plot.
DarkChampion chapter 1 . 5/2
Need to say this. I want to laugh and close this everytime I read shadow legion, or shadow queen. It makes it feel like something an 8 year old came up with, and brings to question if this would even be worth the time spent reading. If the local was in Japan or more anime related I could see the name not being a mockery.
Which is rough because this isnt the most popular theme.
Outside that nice plot so far. The foreshadowing is enjoyable. It's a bit weird that the 'most trusted' are a bunch of kids.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/27
This is one of the most disgusting self inserts I have ever skimmed. The author clearly thinks woman are nothing more than trash and enjoy being sexually abused and denigrated.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/27
Why the hell did you write such an evil and horrible character. She deserved to be abandoned and treated like shit if this is the person she turned out to be. It would have been better if she had been murdered and tossed into the gutter on the side of the road when she ran away at 3.

Let me guess, Daphne will now become a sex friend to the evil vile bitch who murdered her father? I will never understand the mentality of a person who could write sick, perverted shit like this story and I am eternally grateful for that.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/27
I like the neglect drama and hope the potters get their just deserts. The gay lesbian bullshit and submissive sex deviant Narcissisa I could do with out. Not just for the fact that actual lesbians are very, very rare but also because it’s disgusting. No, not the gay part. What two consenting adults chose to engage in is perfectly fine. Pedophila and having a grown ass woman wishing to be treated like a submissive sex slave to a 14 year old girl, this relationship having started with the girl at a younger age, is what is disgusting.
ej-83 chapter 4 . 2/24
hahaha..revenge is best to be served cold and bloody..would love to see her kill off the potters and weasley..one by one..
HarukaTsukinoTenoh chapter 4 . 11/24/2018
can't wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 4 . 10/8/2018
Nice keep tbis story going
kesha qewwn chapter 4 . 9/18/2018
omg.. i am so hot please update this it is so hot
Guest chapter 2 . 6/22/2018
Oh god!
I forgot what kind of person Rebecca is...
(I read this fic a time ago)
PS; Rebekah sounds much better than Rebecca.
TechnoGalen chapter 3 . 4/19/2018
More filler crap.
toile grant chapter 4 . 12/2/2017
good
Mercy chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
The fic is good but for the love of fucking god change her brothers name from Harry, if you're going for a fem harry fanfic, naming the brother Harry is quite frankly stupid and probably making readers think this is just a self insert.

This is by no means a knock on your writing I quite like it, but the name choice for the brother? Total turn off for the fic sorry.
Yaw613 chapter 4 . 11/20/2017
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
Alex2909 chapter 4 . 11/19/2017
love how Rebecca is portrayed, nice lemon with Amelia
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