Well thst was interesting.
Lots of do they make it?
Who is us the guy?
Will you continue?

Very scary.

This was interesting, but I really enjoyed it. I was freaked out. I kept thinking they would get saved, but after so many days of torture, I'm not so hopeful. Why didn't Jake start getting worried when they didn't return or when he didn't hear from them. He should have investigated their whereabouts sooner. I hope Edward is not the bad guy.
Thank you for sharing it and good luck in the contest.

WOWZA! Edward is a sicko! I was waiting for a love triangle and BAM-O! LOL That is quite the sordid pumpkin tale! Thanks for writing for the contest!
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BOH

whoa! I got chills! But Jacob is shady as hell! good luck

Thank you for your entry. Good luck in the contest.
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Ohgeefantasy

that was terrifying to read, so great job there! *shudders*

Grew scary story! Good luck in the contest.
Happy Halloween!

Well, that was certainly a creepy Halloween tale. I wish I knew more, however. Like what business is it exactly they work for, and how could Jacob think two weeks with no words were normal?

Thanks for writing- good luck in the contest!

Really enjoyed this story! And very halloweenish (Yeah I know, that's not a word) lol... I wonder who was the pumpkin man, and you left it where you can actually add to it... my top pick so far!

Good luck in the contest!

Nope, and that's a mild answer.

That was scary for sure...

Good luck in the contest

:) loved this

Holy crap that was evil I loved it thank you