This was a very nice story, which I thoroughly enjoyed. Well done, mate

Oh man, this chapter had me tearing up... Well done, mate.

Oh, this is magnificent! Now begins the empire of Gryffindor!

Helluva opening chapter

Thought it could read through the Targaryen suck off but it’s proven too much. Nice work either way and good luck with the rest of it.

Wassup,

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This is such a great story. Ive read it many times. Its a shame it appears to be adandoned

This story is very good. I don't like Harry Potter but I was enchanted by your way of telling the story in an interesting and easy-to-read way. I hope you have new updates soon. I wait anxiously

Funny

Hmmmmm... interesting for sure. Though I'd be wary of Carcosa considering the connotations with that place and it's name...

Dropping. Bland and boring fic. 5 long chapters of literally nothing significant happening. All this talk about feelings and shit is just straight up cringe. I want to be entertained. Not to be lulled to fucking sleep.

Author do you be a continue this book ?

So that is where the story was abandoned? I'm bummed that it wasn't more focused on the romance between Ginny and Rhaegar. I mean how crucial is this City of Winged Men to the story?
Speaking as a writer myself, I understand why you left this. It's rare for fanfiction writers to finish their big stories.
Take care.

I am unfamiliar with the City of Winged Men. From the letter, I don't trust them. What will they do?