Reviews for Eclipse Reimagined
darthv chapter 25 . 4/3/2018
amazing chapter!
drtenant chapter 1 . 4/2/2018
FYI was talking about the first time she kissed him when he didn't ask for permission
drtenant chapter 1 . 4/2/2018
So nothing bad but I've been rereading the series currently on eclipse again and I've just kinda noticed that edyth doesn't really get as idk what's the term I guess angry like she used to in the first or later books is that intentional like when she find out about Jules kissing beau reading a second time i expected an angrier response or like an fast rapid set of angry responses idk like I said nothing bad so love just something I noticed take it as you will :)
Guest chapter 25 . 4/2/2018
Amazing job as always viser ahahha you and winter okarr on tye same pace now
LD Fan chapter 25 . 4/2/2018
Great chapter and I'm okay with some canon breaking since Life & Death changed the ending of Twilight and has no canon version of New Moon, Eclipse, or Breaking Dawn.
Dragonstar125 chapter 25 . 4/2/2018
nice chapter n good job agree with sparingy
WinterSunshine chapter 25 . 4/2/2018
I find it so funny that we posted the same, corresponding chapters on the same day :D Ha!
I, too, left Bree's male counterpart alive for further purposes, though MINE was a little more sentimental than your reasons ;)

Can't wait for the end, and see how yours differs from mine-simply from having it in Edythe's POV versus Beau's. We'll see where our (relatively) canon imaginations add up! Lol.
FireRed21 chapter 25 . 4/2/2018
Guest chapter 24 . 3/22/2018
As long as you don't make beau hook up with jules in any way or manner we're good lol He is still loyal after all, and his guilt will drive him to an even greater degree into being faithful. that, to me, is redemption.
Shadowdog11 chapter 24 . 3/16/2018
I agree with keeping Edythe’s reaction similar.
pateuvasiliu chapter 24 . 3/13/2018
Good to have you back! I've been following this religiously... it's like I'm a teenager all over again.

I think you've done fine. A little thing I minded is that in the original Jacob gets around Edward's threat by making Bella ask him to kiss her. Would've rather that scene was kept as it was. But apart from that, I'm loving this.
Aurain Orimura chapter 24 . 3/13/2018
Another awesome chapter. Can't wait till the next one where we see the aftermath of everything. Still make me wonder how this will all end since I don't think Beu can't be turned into a vampire for the same reasons as Bella did. Yet Beu was different from other vampires when he got turned in the original ending, so who knows?
LeoH chapter 24 . 3/13/2018
Wow, this chapter was just amazing, it was worth the wait.
The fight was awesome and got me anxious since you said you would take some possibly not popular decisions, for some reason I thought Beau would jump in front of Sarah and got bitten by Reilynn(nice name btw) or something.

But what impressed me the most was Edythe...she's amazing in her own way, what she says, the way she acts, this chapter gave me some weird vibes, I know I'm gonna sound weird but when she talked with Beau, she almost didnt sound like a person to me, it was like she was some kind of entity whose sole purpose is to see Beau happy no matter what. I know that's what she wants the most, but to be able to keep a hold on your feelings like that, this kind of selflessness...she really isn't human xD. It's a little weird, but that's how she is, I get it.

But I'm not gonna lie, I wish she promised to give him some kind of punishment later or something, or maybe Beau would punch himself cause he know Edythe won't hurt him LOL

I absolutely love it, thank you and congratulations, you did a very good job! 3
darthv chapter 24 . 3/13/2018
an absolutely amazing chapter! you are a terrific and extremely talented writer!
Debbie Hicks chapter 24 . 3/12/2018
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Then they dressed after oiling m e in Robes were so heavy the hair was trim once a year then had my eyebrows altered then added Teenaged Ocampan ears ugh watch it my back you Terrans then uh oh dark honeysuckle brown huh Uh what you did I Stink urgh Vulcan robes groan oh Excuse me Madam then the sleeve said Soran no thank you myself was look at twenty yeaes old was eighteen frozen solid was magic what is that you acdress me as T'Sai no my lady myself was really ceremonial but polite was more civliized but well-mannered Archie help holy Crap you look like a Vulcan male it grew back so Royal's my hair is in a fashion a trim what this Robes they very heavy guess who I Am Soran oh no Ambassador Sarek's aide this is terrible what are wearing it's Vulcan robes your blood went Gaean Forest Gren as Grass yiou are paler with a greenish tint that blushed a Green color guys there is a galactic prblem they are filming New Vulcan scen e the one actor it's Leonard Nimoy summoned me he made me Soran aide to Ambassador Sarek howe do I Look alien but extraterrestrial ugh we look like Vulcans then n ow as a actor trained more Vulcan dialects was speaking more.
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