Reviews for To Be Human
Rabid Jakkal chapter 3 . 12/1/2005
I really like your story. This may be completely out-of-context, but whilst respecting your copyright (If you don't have one, you're mad) I could fix your grammatical errors. I did work like this long ago, fixing the documents of someone else, who had the inspiration and a worthwhile cause, but lacked the 'learning' or patience to make it look professional. I like to be a troubleshooter for other authors/artists; I'll claim no credit, steal no property, and it's my pleasure. If you agree. BTW, I 'm loving it so far.
Mistress Joe x Mistress Ice chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
Excellent Intro, when I have time to finish reading and reviewing.
elle chapter 3 . 5/22/2004
i luved ur story! It was so discriped & real.
Masamune's Song chapter 3 . 4/29/2004
This is a great fanfic! Keep it up!
One suggestion so more people might read it- put spaces between the paragraphs so it's less of a chunk to read at once.
I think this is wonderful... let me know what happens!
Ja matta ne chapter 3 . 6/28/2003
Your fanfic is great. I hope you update soon. _ I hope Vermathrax is okay, the poor lil' puppy.

I have a suggestion, maybe you should write in paragraphs and not big blocks. It'd make it a easier to read.

Well, keep writing.

-Black Chaos.