|Reviews for Light the Embers|
| madsthenerdygirl chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
*sigh* I love this one (and all of your other film interlude stories). The film gave us a lot of great material as to how they came to care for one another, but we often forget that there was time in between scenes and more probably happened to help them grow closer. This was perfect.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Awwwww please finish the story! :3
| Sylarfan chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
This was a great one. On to the next!
| Qualia Des chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Absolutely adorable! And I love how perfectly you write Evelyn, you really bring out the coquette in her. :)
| PerfectDisaster22 chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Another very nice in-betweener. The fire imagery was really nicely done- not too heavy-handed to be irritating, not so light that you wonder where the title came from. You do a marvelous job of diving into these characters' psychology, and it makes for a really nice story. Bravo!
| Dimac99 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Another brilliant fic, with enough Burns-is-missing-important-parts-of-his-anatomy-and-it's-all-Evie's-fault to prevent it from being a pure fluff piece.
I love Evie's little fib at the end but the Dewey Decimal System had me in utter knots! It always seemed rediculously complicated to me, and I've only seen it in its refined 90's and 00's form. (I won't count the 80's; I never needed it to find anything written by Enid Blyton or Franklin W Dixon! OMG! I just realised that spending my childhood reading The Famous Five is what ignited my love for adventure stories like The Mummy!)
| there wont be a sequel chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Okay, I REALLY loved this one. And if I could put italics in reviews, the 'really' in the last sentence would be italicized. ;) Oh man... that tent scene totally made me melt. Started smiling like an idiot again... Anyhoo, this seriously just made my day (or night, since it is night right now). Gah, you are such a wonderful writer.
Your fics make me happy.
| Trinity chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
It was kinda weird to read Rick's name as Rick at the very end instead of O'Connell like you wrote it out for the rest of the story. I would advise not to switch his name like that-it really does throw off the reader P
Other than that, it was a brilliant fic. It was really nice to read this after reading all your other fics beforehand .
| Vespera chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Very nice piece. Once again, you've done a great job with the characterizations, this time taking advantage of the 3rd person POV to get a glimpse into the heads of all the characters. You've done a great job with everyone, but Jonathan particularly shines with his charm and rare insights.
| Indygodusk chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
That was cute and fun to read. I like your characterizations.
| Dina C chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
Great story! So, where is the rest of it? C'mon, get to work!
| A. Windsor chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
oh this was awesome! So awesomely written and I loved the references to fire! So awesome! I LOVED IT! Great great job!
| gummyvites chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
I love this story. :sigh: I hope it's not finished... it seems like it so much more could happen... you have to atleast get them to Cairo!
I hope you don't mind... but I'd like to use your idea of Rick's name being his only "honest possesion" in my fan fic. If that's not cool e-mail me and let me know.. and I'll see how I can change it. (it's not posted yet, so don't go lookin for it.. ) :)
And to end, I repeat.. I love this story. As a critique, in the end, Evelyn and Jonathon both kinda seem to lose their characters, and become much more aggressive then I think they would. And I don't know if Jonathon would ever try to patronize Rick... I don't think he's that much older than him. Other than that... the story was awesome!
| Tricia dSC chapter 1 . 6/7/2003
I love it! Very well written! Keep up the good work!
| MaidM chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
ahh. very very romantic.