This entire premise is stupid as fuck and I have no interest reading about a world where this is possible, it's just so lacking in subtlety. Not to mention that the "protagonist" is literally clueless.

The epilogue felt a bit rushed but other than that it was a really good story.

To be honest, with this level of violence from the Dursleys, the passivity of the Heroes and their reactionary attitude towards the Dursleys is disgusting, not pitiful. Like they really deserve more violence until they learn how to defend and attack. With this level of violence, the Heroes continue to endure it, almost to the point of rape. They could kill Vernon and all the Dursleys a million times without any magic - short circuit the wiring at night, or set fire to the kitchen, or take knives and start a massacre. Lots of options. But even having brought to an attempted rape, they bow their heads and simply go into the closet without finishing off the enemy. It's fucking stupid, so their miserable life is actually deserved - since they can only whine and crawl, and do not want to take responsibility into their own hands, then they should suffer.

I love this story. Love the ending. I just pretend the Dursleys were brutally butchered

Wow. I hate it. They killed people who harmed them LESS than the dursleys and you didnt let them get true closure here…

I am absolutely loving this fic now

Also, as i said enjoying it but holy hell are you giving a lot of TRAGIC backstory without any real payoff. So far a few horcrux and….a single evil slain. Not a lot for timetravelers

This is enjoyable but holy hell i hope in your later fics you learned how to separate the recaps from the current story. Dates, italics, SOMETHING. Its insane trying to figure out when the hell you are writing about

This feels like the bards tale ending. The F it and walk away ending… Honestley that entire culture did need to burn. All empires fall, it’s just a matter of time before corruption takes control. That’s why the us has the three split controllers. Congress, courts and presidential. They are to fight for power and screw each other for as long as possible but as you can see in the news corporate America is beyond stupid. The party red vrs blue is so divided and hateful we may as well brand the all and stick them in an arena. Call it party cleansing…
Anywho love the concept of the story, it would be great if dubles made a horcrux “for the greater good and was locked into perpetual war with riddle. Or Grendelwood somehow got Re empowered and turned it into a three way.

What I don't quite understand is why did you do a time travel plot of all things, the start definitely doesn't make much of any actual sense.

Accents are hard to lose, especially distinct ones. I know a guy who has lived in the states for nearly thirty years after moving here from the Czech republic and his accent is still so thick that I can barely understand him.

I thought Dumbledore was supposed to be just misguided not evil in this story? Because Rose just said that Vernon repeatedly tried to rape her, and his response was basically just "You'll just have to deal with it." That's not misguided. That's evil.

Oh I do love the significance of that last line from Tonks.

Why do they care what anyone else thinks? This whole secrets and intrigue plotline is stupid. Just have them own it.

Very interesting story thanks for writing it!