Reviews for Trying again
GN00QuanTa chapter 9 . 4/18
Is this a dead story?
DukeSomerset chapter 9 . 4/5
Please let me know if this story is abandoned, it's very good. The plot is relaxed and not over the top. Please continue
kizoku.ouninaru chapter 9 . 3/12
i need moooore!~~
sortofbored chapter 9 . 2/18
Great story so far. Hope to see more soon.
Eternity456 chapter 9 . 1/27
This is interesting please update soon
Kitanos chapter 7 . 11/25/2017
crapiest name ever
Devola chapter 9 . 11/20/2017
It's been over 3/4 of a year since your last update. I know you didn't die in February, since you updated your profile in June.

It's pretty rude to leave people hanging on a cliff hanger for so long. I was also getting pretty impatient over how slow Naruto's relationship with Rias and the other girls has been moving. They sleep in bed with him nude, yet none of them have yet to even kiss the guy.

I don't know what your excuse is, be it laziness or that "oragianal" story you mentioned, but you really need to finish what you've started. You might also want to invest in some kind of dictionary or spell check, since you don't seem to really bother correcting your spelling errors.
Kitanos chapter 5 . 11/22/2017
how are they hanging from their belt loops AND naked at the same time? I think I missed something, funny tho.
RogueAssassinNaruto chapter 6 . 11/22/2017
aren't both of them blonde so my question is this is yuto calling himself a bastard aswell
carwash36 chapter 9 . 11/17/2017
carwash36 chapter 6 . 11/17/2017
Hell yeahs, nickname get!
carwash36 chapter 1 . 11/16/2017
SinfulKiss chapter 8 . 11/11/2017
I really hope you're ok. It's been a while since your last update and there hasn't been any activity on your profile. Best of wishes and hope you're healthy.
Fayth Mayonaka chapter 9 . 11/10/2017
Wish this would continue but I doubt it will. It’s a good story so it’s a shame to see it die before a certain fire chicken does.
SlyUzumakiVii chapter 1 . 10/17/2017
knarf... you're on my wavelength! btw author! hikari imouto OC is the CUTEST OC. no need to continue the fact has been stated! she's adorable!
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