I was wondering how this chapter would turn out and i enjoyed what you came up with. Does suck about the number of deaths that happened while loading and unloading the supplies like they were.

I feel bad for Rory since she can’t get any meditation in like she keeps on trying to do. I wonder if that will change at all and she gets more peace from her roommate/friend instead of being interrupted like she keeps getting.

I feel bad for Vyorin being forced into the command branch like his father was. I wonder where he ends up in the long run while in starfleet service.

Seems like Vyorin is like his parents in needing to look into things that seem off. I wonder if we will read if the maglocks malfunctions were just accidents or if they were indeed sabotage.

Thanks for the update and i wonder how things will end up turning out for those in the next chapter and how the story will go from there. I am looking forward to reading what ideas you have for those involved when the time is able to come to do so.

great chapter

Nice progression chapter. Lots of good important detail. Hope to see the next bit soon.

- Armiture
From,I think, eldest to youngest.

Siegfried: Samui
Vyorin' T'Lyra
Aurora: Alison
Niwara & R'raak: M'Rella
Erik: Samui
Sakuya: Shizuka
Ages as of 2306 are; 18, 18, 17, 17, 16, 16

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Not the catacomb delve I was expecting but quite enjoyable. It was good to see some of the other children of Naruto doing well. Sadly, I don't think the hedonist son of the CEO will leave Niwara alone.

I'm having trouble keeping track of his kids but I do believe he has another pair of twins. I need a score card in my old age. LOL

Thanks for the entertaining update.

So Niwara gave her guests, basically and unintentionally, Catnip Tea. Now that I know the context, that is hilarious.

Hope that Mishka dude, takes the hint to back off; it won't look good for R'raak if he gelds another Caitian male, because he foolishly refused to take no for an answer to his advances.

Been a while since I did a review; but overall, this chapter was very well done and I look forward to the next.

great chapter thanks

LOL, giving Caitians catnip was unexpected bit funny to read. Glad to see all the kids are facing their own problems and successes during this time. I wonder if some of them will experience no Pon Far at all or even a more severe one based on the genetic combinations. Such as maybe a hybrid of Vulcan and Augment won’t experience it but Caitian and Vulcan hybrids have it worse. Just a sudden thought

i do like the look into the children of naruto and his wives lives

Nice chapter

Naruto has made an insane amount of credits from licensing his ship design so many years ago. I'm sure he very logically made some prudent wartime investments since that have grown several times over.

What has the family done since? Considering so many brilliant designers are in the family, starting a shipyard of their own seems like it would be a great fit and many in the family could bring their talents to the family company. Claiming a world of their own might even be a logical next step.

To read about sexual harassment always makes me angry.

Naruto's family is very unique if I'm honest. I love seeing so much diversity and I want to see more of Naruto's children in their daily lives.

Nice work again no complaints