I did not fall asleep because of the rant... Totally...

So I just blew through this and HandCrafted in about a week and I have to say my mind is just blown at how amazing the stories are. I never knew IzuMina was a thing I wanted till this. I do have to say I loved reading the story and seeing you saying how it would only be a few more chapters probably and I'd be hitting next knowing there were 76 chapters. I'm curious to see the changes this has to the Overhaul arc, as well as why you weren't a fan of the canon one? I also just want some sweet IzuMina fluff chapters which with the School Festival arc should give non-stop ones hopefully!

so...this was all just a justification for bakugo's stupid "just beat the villain" mentality?

kamui saw him at the sports festival

it just seems so forced at times

I actually haven't noticed an overabundance of commas. I haven't really noticed any at all, which means you're doing it right. The only thing is variety in both sentence structure and vocabulary. You're vocab usage is perfectly fine actually, but sometimes you use one word mire than once and it sticks out. For example, in the second sentence of this chapter, you use "before" twice which makes the sentence really awkward as well as run on, I think. Other than that though, your writing is very good.

I think this is great so far and I completely agree about Mina being the cutest character.

I just got to say this is one of my favorite pairs in the Series, they blend so well together.

I’m still fairly new to fanfiction, and I’m also heavily biased towards izuocha, but this is amazing. Seriously, 500k words? You deserve all the respect for this, I mean it took me a week just to read it. I wasn’t expecting to be feeling it as much during the camp/kidnap arc, since I’m mostly here for the fluff, but you still managed to make it almost as enjoyable as the rest. I’ve read like 20 fanfics in the past month, and while I wouldn’t say I enjoyed this the most, you are absolutely the writer I have the most respect for. I can definitively say that I will be keeping up with the chapters.

So at this point izuku has been kidnapped for a few days but Mina and the gang decide to take a break from their rescue mission to talk about their feelings because Mina seems a little stressed... where is the sense of urgency?

Seriously, they have no idea what shigaraki has been doing to izuku over the last few days he could have a nut cracker on his balls right now but no... let's take a break because Mina is a little stressed... and that's not even mentioning the fact that izuku has gone days without medical attention with TWO SHATTERED ARMS. A broken arm is no joke, without proper circulation for that long they're gonna have to amputate those things by the time they actually save him.

Anyway that aside I really have enjoyed this story for the most part, I like that you had the balls to actually diverge and actually do your own thing with your writing. The whole forming a team idea is great and could form some really interesting chapters later on. I'm just having to suspend my disbelief a little at the moment because of the illogical actions of some of the characters here.

I loved It! Keep on doing more! I would like to see this turn out to be something really big in the future!

Ship name miku

This is some cutesy shit, I fucking love it ️.

had to comment again after I finally read the chapter. Loved the part at the end, mina's last joke that timing and line were perfect. :D

oh my god that part about the soldiers was amazing. I'm so happy for you man.

and I wish them well also. it's nice to hear things that are just, just good.