|Reviews for Memoirs of the Holy War (Archive)|
| Number13teen chapter 72 . 11/29/2019
Yay, Sylvia is back and she’s still really chipper despite the conditions she was found in. Strong like her daughter.
Also the beginning had me laughing quite a bit. A little kitty has been naughty.
| The Incredible Muffin chapter 72 . 10/15/2019
Good lord, that morbid scene with all the tortured/vivisected people is going to haunt my nightmares for a while. I know you've put some good Loptryians into this story, but it's really hard to sympathize with any of them when stuff like this happens. Still, a great chapter, and I look forward to more.
| Cyberchao X chapter 72 . 10/12/2019
You're back! I love this, and nice job with the Ayra and Lex references. And loved the humorous interlude with Seliph's scratches. Can't wait to see when Lene will realize.
| Shini Kurogane chapter 72 . 10/11/2019
Ow, that ending, just ow. I'm really not sure whether I want Lene to actually know her parentage, and whether I want to see the confrontation if she ends up knowing. Because knowing Sylvia, if Lene ends up exploding in anger, she will just accept Lene's anger wholeheartedly, yet that's clearly no way how a mother and daughter should connect after a very long time, especially when the circumstances are... that bad. Looking forward for the next chapter!
| BlueBlade87 chapter 72 . 10/11/2019
yay chapter~ Im glad Sylvia is alive now we can have bittersweet moments of her watching Lene and Ares being cute and then we can all cry. But also this chapter doesn't eliminate the headcanon I have of cute baby animals just know that Rinoa and the others with Od blood are good people and even with the logic of 'Humans go out further in the woods to hunt and gather things'. Also i'm pretty sure if Rinoa had Cypher cards all her base class ones would have her with random baby animals or Hestia. But I cant way for more keep up the good work.
| Parse chapter 71 . 8/12/2019
Absolutely beautiful piece of writing. This was such a good take on how a political scenario can be complex and morally grey, but at the bottom line there is a limit to which greyness can excuse evil atrocities conducted in Judgral.
While Riona, Seliph and other Gen2 characters have reflected and deliberated on righteousness of their actions in the previous chapters, it was great to see the resolve of our protagonists.
| Guest chapter 71 . 7/19/2019
This was a good chapter, especially the whole part with Tine.
| Cyberchao X chapter 71 . 7/2/2019
Wow that was long. Now I get why I'd been without my Naryfiel fix for so long! So much crammed into a single chapter. So much to enjoy!
| RavenPuffPrefect1296 chapter 59 . 6/27/2019
I could totally relate to Riona. It was so funny reading that scene. And bobcats are known for their floofy fur.
| RavenPuffPrefect1296 chapter 48 . 6/25/2019
Well, this chapter is heartbreaking...
| The Incredible Muffin chapter 71 . 6/24/2019
Okay, I know that FE4 is particularly dark among the franchise, but I feel that it bears repeating that you've made this Game of Thrones levels of dark. There is some MESSED UP stuff in this story. However, that scene when Ares protecting Seliph is amazing. Bloom being so durable is annoying, but only because I want to see him die. Fire Emblem does a great job of giving us hateable villains, but you take it to, once again, Game of Thrones levels. Thank you for that, because the villains' deaths become even more satisfying. I can't wait for more!
| Ghost of Magic chapter 71 . 6/22/2019
I couldn't stop laughing in this chapter, great job.
| Xbro Kong chapter 71 . 6/22/2019
Finally got back and was pleasantly surprised to see a new chapter uploaded. Thank you very much for updating this story. This just brightened my day
| BlueBlade87 chapter 71 . 6/22/2019
Yay chapter and it was so good too! The army keeps getting more and more victories. But the upcoming chapters are going to be interesting since we might be getting three new big members to the group, though I doubt two will join. Seriously Conall and Ishtar need to live so they can be happy together and get teased by the whole family. But keep up the good work and I cant wait for more.
| Cavik chapter 68 . 5/19/2019
Well, that certainly was one of the most heated "the reason you suck" speeches I've read in a while