im glad you're writing a sequel-story-thing. it means more vicious and gren! the chapters are wonderfully written and i cant wait for the next one. i wonder what'll happen between spike and vicious? and as always, i wanna know how vicious's and gren's relationship will progress. update soon!

Incredicle. Excellent job. I have not read such a wonderful fic like that in a long time. Could. Not. Stop. Reading. Until. Done! I love your writing. Keep it goin'.

I'm only on the first chapter, but I'd love to assume that the rest of the chapters that I'm going to be reading are as wonderful as this (unfortunately short) first one. I will definetly review every chapter. I have not read a good Vicious/Gren fanfic ever since I left the Cowboy Bebop fanfic-dom. Thanks for bringing me back, if only temporarily.

Lovely Lovely Lovely stuff! Very good job, this. Nicely done.

I don't know if this was the last chapter or not, but I got a "this is only the beginning" feeling when reading it. I like that you brought things full circle, series wise, by ending the chapter with Gren and Faye voicing some of the truths they weren't able to acknowledge in his apartment in Jupiter JazzI.

Oh faye was so sweet. Getting all pissed! Thanks for the plushies you gave out (ch 14) I really enjoyed this last chapter, Good stuff!

short and sweet. but very cool and well written.

Yahoo, i finally found a decent gren/vicious fic

So wait. Is it over? I'm getting confused. Well either wasy it's still great!

SaZ~

Ohh. my. *adoringly blissful sigh* That was incredible! Just incredible! What an ending! *applauds vehemently* I must admit that I'm relieved that Spike lived .(Kind of a sucker for that guy.) but I'm even more relieved at the conclusion between Gren and Vicious. And I think it took incredible skill to give Vicious such a sense of humanity and flaw, without ever losing the innate character.

I have to say that the writing in this story is superb. And it's a true pleasure to enjoy such skill with prose and turn of phrase woven into such a magnificent plot, with as much care given to the words as to the characters. Too many times I find stories that are either well plotted, but hurried and clumsily written, or written with extreme skill with too little thought given to the story itself. You've got the winning combination here, though! A true masterpiece of storytelling!

This is a very well written fic, i enjoyed it tremendously. I like the way you had their internal monologues explain things, put things in different perspectives.

Plus it centered around Gren one of my favorite characters from Cowboy Bebop. I always thought his screen time was way too short.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful fic.

That was an awesome story. Really great writing! I couldn't stop reading this unitl the end I loved Jet's line "You women are all the same. Just get it over with as fast as possible so you can do something else." Oh god I never laughed so hard! Your story was really great I loved it!

yay, they made up! that was so good! i loved the story. is this the end though? if it is then im sad but it was a good ending. i wouldnt mind seeing more though!

Wow. Wonderful ending _ I think it's the ending. Well anyway. Great story the whole way through. I loved it so much. It's a shame that it has to end. But everything in this world has to come to a hault at some point or another doesn't it? Well once again. Great story. You are a fabulous writer.

SaZ~

Beautifully done, and worded! I never read yaoi but I'm glad I read this fic, otherwise I would've missed all these great characterizations. Is this the end though? If so I hope there'll be a sequel.

I'd love to see how you would handle a post- aftermath confrontation between Vicious and Spike. Pretty much all the stories that have them surviving have them both going right back to trying to kill each other without trying to explore any other type of storyline.

Thanks for the review and for pointing out that mistake! I was afraid I was gonna overlook something obvious. _

You have a very lovely prose style! Wish I could get the stuff I write to flow so smoothly. Gren's certainly a worthy subject to base a fic on. It's amazing how compelling and complex Bebop's creators made him, despite how little screen time he had.

And, five years huh? That's a very long time frame. The general consensus is that the events of the series took place over the course of a year. But, this is fan fiction so pretty much anything is possible. :)