Reviews for The Art of War
RowenaC chapter 6 . 11/8/2024
What does she mean by 35 year old here ?
AnnaT282 chapter 57 . 9/11/2024
This story was absolutely brilliant! I love the plot itself, your characters were spot on, and I like your writing stile!3
I just binged the whole thing (who needs sleep anyway?) and let me tell you, no regrets!

And the part where Hermione started her training, convinced/motivated me to decide to work out actually daily, so if I'm gonna be fit as hell by Christmas, it's all gonna be your fault!P
Espied7 chapter 57 . 7/25/2024
This is like a less-heavy When a Lioness Fights, and I adore it. Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 57 . 7/21/2024
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this but I feel the need to point out that it is very clearly a fanfic of a fanfic.
If you like this read and are looking for something a bit darker and more in depth then please check out When A Lioness Fights by Kayly Silverstorm. It is almost word for word replicated here with a few adjustments and truthfully should have been credited by the author.
All that being said, I did enjoy the more lighthearted tone that this fic gave alongside more romantic scenes.
Chobug23 chapter 34 . 7/10/2024
I was going to suggest The Art of War as a wonderful story and one of my favorites but then I realized that that is litterally what I’m reading. Thank tou ADHD.
daughterofdarkness87 chapter 17 . 4/7/2024
I am 17 chapters in and hooked! I apolgize for not reviewing all the chapters before this! I'm gonna keep reading but I love this story so far!
achondrite chapter 57 . 3/30/2024
3 3 3
Sacred Storyline chapter 57 . 9/23/2023
I love, love, loved this story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! I particularly enjoyed how amused Severus was with Hermione’s blatant abuse of the time turner! And I really liked your characterization of him. A satisfying end to a wonderful tale.
Wobalo chapter 57 . 8/30/2023
Thank you for such a lovely story exploring two of my favourite characters!
Wobalo chapter 11 . 8/29/2023
Im really enjoying the concept of Hermione aging by overuse of the time turner here, and Snape noticing her more as a person as she does.

Your Hermione is so intricate; clever and yet slightly unsure of herself, brave and yet reserved. It has been such a pleasure to read that I have got this far without a break!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2023
It ends up feeling like you randomly slipped into first person perspective when 'I know I saw an eye roll...' shows up with no punctuation to distinguish it as Snape's thoughts and not narration.
Skinyl chapter 57 . 5/20/2023
This was a wonderful story. Thank you
Miss Gabrielle Delacour chapter 57 . 5/13/2023
The ending is so perfect I'm crying. So thoughtful, so beautiful, and so different from the books, showing Harry as a grown adult with developed compassion, in comparison to Harry-the-Chosen-One-and-Only-One-Worth-Thinking-of-Especially-By-Himself that ended the books, and I so love that idea!
Miss Gabrielle Delacour chapter 39 . 5/13/2023
I'm crying, I feel so sorry for Pansy, it all sounds just so... miserable
ChosenInWinter chapter 26 . 2/1/2023
I’m so glad that in your story Severus owns his feelings for Hermione and doesn’t pull away or hate himself for caring about her. It’s refreshing!
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