Reviews for The Art of War |
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RowenaC chapter 6 . 11/8/2024 What does she mean by 35 year old here ? |
AnnaT282 chapter 57 . 9/11/2024 This story was absolutely brilliant! I love the plot itself, your characters were spot on, and I like your writing stile!3 I just binged the whole thing (who needs sleep anyway?) and let me tell you, no regrets! And the part where Hermione started her training, convinced/motivated me to decide to work out actually daily, so if I'm gonna be fit as hell by Christmas, it's all gonna be your fault!P |
Espied7 chapter 57 . 7/25/2024 This is like a less-heavy When a Lioness Fights, and I adore it. Thanks for sharing! |
Guest chapter 57 . 7/21/2024 I thoroughly enjoyed reading this but I feel the need to point out that it is very clearly a fanfic of a fanfic. If you like this read and are looking for something a bit darker and more in depth then please check out When A Lioness Fights by Kayly Silverstorm. It is almost word for word replicated here with a few adjustments and truthfully should have been credited by the author. All that being said, I did enjoy the more lighthearted tone that this fic gave alongside more romantic scenes. |
Chobug23 chapter 34 . 7/10/2024 I was going to suggest The Art of War as a wonderful story and one of my favorites but then I realized that that is litterally what I’m reading. Thank tou ADHD. |
daughterofdarkness87 chapter 17 . 4/7/2024 I am 17 chapters in and hooked! I apolgize for not reviewing all the chapters before this! I'm gonna keep reading but I love this story so far! |
achondrite chapter 57 . 3/30/2024 3 3 3 |
Sacred Storyline chapter 57 . 9/23/2023 I love, love, loved this story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! I particularly enjoyed how amused Severus was with Hermione’s blatant abuse of the time turner! And I really liked your characterization of him. A satisfying end to a wonderful tale. |
Wobalo chapter 57 . 8/30/2023 Thank you for such a lovely story exploring two of my favourite characters! |
Wobalo chapter 11 . 8/29/2023 Im really enjoying the concept of Hermione aging by overuse of the time turner here, and Snape noticing her more as a person as she does. Your Hermione is so intricate; clever and yet slightly unsure of herself, brave and yet reserved. It has been such a pleasure to read that I have got this far without a break! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2023 It ends up feeling like you randomly slipped into first person perspective when 'I know I saw an eye roll...' shows up with no punctuation to distinguish it as Snape's thoughts and not narration. |
Skinyl chapter 57 . 5/20/2023 This was a wonderful story. Thank you |
Miss Gabrielle Delacour chapter 57 . 5/13/2023 The ending is so perfect I'm crying. So thoughtful, so beautiful, and so different from the books, showing Harry as a grown adult with developed compassion, in comparison to Harry-the-Chosen-One-and-Only-One-Worth-Thinking-of-Especially-By-Himself that ended the books, and I so love that idea! |
Miss Gabrielle Delacour chapter 39 . 5/13/2023 I'm crying, I feel so sorry for Pansy, it all sounds just so... miserable |
ChosenInWinter chapter 26 . 2/1/2023 I’m so glad that in your story Severus owns his feelings for Hermione and doesn’t pull away or hate himself for caring about her. It’s refreshing! |