Reviews for The Art of War
dramonie1028 chapter 55 . 12/23/2022
Are you still going to do a epilogue for this story? I just re-read it and even if it's only one chapter I love this story so much I'd love to read just a little bit more
Sue Roe chapter 57 . 12/5/2022
Outstanding story! Your story line flowed very well and I liked how you directed your characters. I also liked your OC characters.
karishma85 chapter 1 . 10/18/2022
This is a brilliant story! I love the banter and Hermione as a BAMF. Could do with more smut but I’ll forgive you
Angeltsuki chapter 57 . 9/14/2022
I loved it, it was extremely well written with all the right Oomphs!
Maria221B chapter 22 . 9/4/2022
I haven't even finished the fic but I must say it is FANTASTIC. so we'll written CONGRATS!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2022
This is well written. During the course of reading it, it just turned out to be a genre that's not my cup of tea (powerful!protagonist, Hermione basically training to become an elite killer fighter), which I would not have expected from the summary. Would you mind maybe adding a tag for powerful!Hermione? I'll stick with your badass Narcissa fic though...
RandomGerman chapter 57 . 5/5/2022
What an epic story! It was long and well worth every second. I will give this a second read if I stumble upon this story again. Thanks for sharing!
excessivelyperky chapter 57 . 4/3/2022
Great ending. I enjoyed it very much (though Sirius will be sad nobody wants to help him murder Snape this time around).
excessivelyperky chapter 56 . 4/1/2022
Excellent planning and battle, though battle plans often collapse when the enemy hits them. Also, the Wizarding World and mass strategy are total strangers (the British square is a formation that is easy and fun to learn; also, a couple of healers on tap to keep Order members alive and kicking and fighting is often a very good idea).
The Ass of Bore chapter 1 . 1/24/2022
(How a straight!Harry dimension hopping would really deal with bent4draco!Harry)

WORLD #333 – The One with No Excuse
A.K. recognized Number Four Privet Drive immediately. While never really a good sign, it wasn't necessarily a bad one either. He snuck his way quietly into the house. He double-checked the cupboard under the stairs out of habit, though he could tell there wasn't anyone in there.

When he got to the littlest bedroom, better known as Dudley's former second bedroom, he pressed his ear up to the door. Only a soft breeze and the sound of sleeping could be heard, so he cast a silencing charm and made his way on in. Harry's bed had been magically enlarged to a respectable looking Queen size, and he saw a pair of pale feet sticking out from under the massive fluffy looking comforter.

A.K. thought there seemed to be a few more lumps than normal, and as he looked around the room he saw not one, but two magical trunks. A.K. bent down to take a peek in them and in the first found his old Invisibility cloak, some Gryffindor robes, and the Marauder's Map. All perfectly normal things that brought A.K. comfort to see. Then he looked into the second trunk and found a bottle of hair gel. This was certainly different. It was when he pulled out another school robe, but this time with the emblem of Slytherin on it, that A.K. stumbled backwards in surprise.

"Wha-" A muffled voice called out from under the comforter. "What's going on?" Harry's head came peeking out from the covers. Only it was the bottom of the covers right next to the pale feet that now appeared to not belong to Harry.

A blonde head popped out from the top of the covers, slowly waking up as well. "Yes, love? Something the matter?"

Harry cracked open an eye to see the sheer disgust and horror on the face of the strange man in his room. He closed his eyes again, wondering if he could go back to sleep. Harry tiredly asked, "Who are you?"

"Avada Kedavra!" A.K. called out hitting the sleepy, young Malfoy scion in the face.

"Avada Kedavra?" the exhausted Harry said as he tenderly rubbed his lover's feet. "That's a pretty silly name," he explained with his wrist bent lazily. "How's aboots I call you A.K. instead?"

"Avada Kedavra!" A.K. insisted aiming towards Harry, who just happened to sit up at the right moment and missed being hit by only millimeters.

"Fine, fine, no nicknames. Got it." Harry said as he leaned backward towards Draco, tiredly wiping the crust from his eyes. He was showing a fair amount of asscrack through the top of his pajama pants. "Drakey Poo? Why isn't my Silver Serpent ticklish anymore?"

A.K. stepped forward and made sure not to miss this time. "Avada Kedavra!"

And just like that Harry Potter was dead.

A.K. just shook his head in disappointment. "How many of these goddamn worlds are there?"

While A.K. wasn't homosexual, and therefore didn't have the best judgment when it comes to attractive males, he still had to admit he could probably do better than Ron. Maybe someone like Oliver or even Seamus. Hell, Bill or Charlie might swing that way. But it doesn't matter what twisted justification a Harry makes. There's no excuse for Malfoy. Or Snape. Ever. Ever ever.

A.K. frowned looking at Harry's surprisingly fit and toned dead body next to the sickly pale ferrety thing...

Anyone shipping Harry and Malfoy is despicable & gets what they deserve.

Fuck you Drarry writers - there's a specific special place in the hottest hells reserved just for u creepy moron authors.
kittykat89xx chapter 57 . 1/10/2022
I really loved this story. Thanks for sharing!
Estella chapter 57 . 1/1/2022
Well, this has been a fantastic ride for sure. Can't wait to read the Epilogue of it! This story had all my favourite tropes in it. Really, you're a fantastical writer. Now I'm gonna have to read the rest of your stories which I'm sure I'll enjoy as much as this one if your writing style is anything to go by. Once again, this was an excellent story!
NovaMater chapter 57 . 11/12/2021
I just enjoyed re-reading this story again. Thank you so much for writing it!
excessivelyperky chapter 55 . 10/16/2021
If I were Snape, I'd have Ron or Pansy start torching off the Inferi to reduce the need for the shield. Yes, it's bad form to burn down part of Malfoy Manor, but oh well.

And what a pity that Hogwarts doesn't have any suits of armor or shields suitable for acting as physical barriers for any Unforgivables. Sarcasm. Nobody ever seems to make use of them!

However, it would seem that Harry did the job, and one hopes the rest of the DEs will soon die as well.
dramonie1028 chapter 56 . 6/27/2021
Please finish this story it's one of my all-time favorites!
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