Reviews for Pokemon Master |
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![]() ![]() so may appeared and brock is back. Also about the collar it is back, i didn't really seen mewtwo put it back on ash neck in the former chapter, and what are the new modification? Also when do you plan for the ash receive the tight monitoring wrist and ankles cuffs? (if you always plan to use my suggestion). PS: can't post a review normally since you removed a chapter (likely update note) and i already reviewed ch32, so i post as guest, but you have already have my pseudo to answer in PM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see thismupdated. Is it bad I hope May gets captured as well. Probably considering I find myself hoping Mewtwo will have a team including Ash, May, Dawn, and Lillie.(I don't like Misty or Iris) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, it was a while since last update (2 years) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES A NEW CHAPTER I BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please make more |
![]() ![]() ![]() For Arceus's sake please spell my favorite non-legendary right. Pidgeot is the spelling you are looking for. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally an update, like a christmas gift. So mewtwo is finally upgrade ash collar, can't wait to see what he will add, and if he will put new devices on him (like the permanent bracelets, etc). And finally mewtwo get rid of that annoying misty to some far place. Also look we have a new visitor, ask what cynthia will do (after all, what mewtwo do with ash is not different from what humans do with pokemon, and despite the kinky relationship and stuff, ash is not treated bad. Can't wait next chapters for the new collar and maybe extra permanent new jewelries ash will receive. Hope next chapter will come very soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you like non con, this is the story for you. If you you don't, stay away from this story. if you don't know what non con is, search "define non con" in Google. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I suggest reducing the non con a bit. Many people don't like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The sudden lemon was distracting and seemingly out of place. It wasn't very well introduced. |
![]() ![]() ![]() try composing in Google Drive. Google recognizes the names of all Pokemon and will correct you if you misspell the names. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting that armor, ask what ash can do with it. Also can't wait for the new permanent collar and bracelets, etc mewtwo will put on ash. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the review on my story. It is rare to see somebody review my story that is not a troll. Dont like yaoi, but dont let that stop you. Have a nice day |
![]() ![]() ![]() so more peaceful chapter here. Yep finally misty is definitely jealous. Can't wait for next chapters (hope will be updated soon) and ash receive all his new permanent devices |