Reviews for Red like Roses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome I can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() You do realize that the dream sword, shield, and staff are the only weapons write and as you said the choices you make with which ones to keep and which one to give up reflect how the Keyblade wielder grows, right? It's a good concept but honestly not my cup of tea, or coffee really. Besides I don't think you get the concepts of Keyblades and the overall story, no offense but this feels like you only get the basic concept of the Kingdom Hearts. Sorry if that was really rude but that's just my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never watched Kingdom Hearts, but this fic made me curious. It is better than most fics. It will surely grow to becom3 one of the greatest stories in the crossover section of RWBY. Do your best I am cheering for you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely a good start. But the Dive to the Heart was a tad short. But still, thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This a really interesting, and AWESOME idea man. :) I'M SOLD! XD I can't wait to see what you do with it. :D Update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It looks promising... Ruby seems to be looking foreword to the scythe though. Will you give her the same ability as Sora in KH3 and be able to change weapons (somewhat anyway.)? Will she carry a scythe as a whole other weapon (which I doubt)? Or will you do away with the scythe idea? Make her master the keyblade, and the many spells that come with it? Also, while kinda obvious, will you make her a light, dark, or twilight/dawn keyblade wielder? Maybe in between just because she is understanding or was curious? Or dark because she took that curiosity too far? Or just go with light because of her personality? Will she be more powerful than? Also, with this as her trump card, will you bother with the silver eye/maiden thing (if she's a maiden at all anyway). With her weapon being potentially different, will you change her semblance to match it at all? Or keep it speed? Also, will you be giving her magic a limit like the main games, or something like birth by sleep where she can use it somewhat constantly? If you introduce the changing weapon thing, you'll probably introduce drive forms. If you do that, she probably will be more like a jack of all trade with more proficiency in swords (since that is the keyblade's default form), which could be interesting to see. What would also be awesome would be summons. Even if you aren't going to introduce the aspect of other worlds, I think summoning could be pretty interesting. It would have to work differently if you aren't going to have worlds swallowed up from darkness though... maybe d-linking? That could be particularly useful when she gets to beacon. Heck, I would probably prefer d-linking with semblances thrown in the mix... that could get very fun. You'd have to make up an explanation, but the benefit from that would be amazing. So many possible routes to take it... Whoops, I'm rambling. Anyway, this has potential. I haven't read many RWBYKingdom Hearts crossovers, and what I did read usually followed KH and made it about other worlds. While nice, I like this idea better. Matter I'll give this crossover another shot... Thanks for taking the time to write. It means a lot to the people who read and are entertained by your work. Hope to see more, and soon, ~Red Renegade |
![]() ![]() ![]() continue this story I like it but this pilot was short we didn't see the full dive to the heart. oh well no doubt like the Heartless the Grimm hold a great fear for the Keyblade and will no doubt target Ruby here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good intro. Looking forward to more. |