Reviews for Squirm
sssolaine chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Holy shit. I'm at loss for words. Scary short without the gory details. You left it hanging at just the right part.
Nargles Inspector chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
can't wait for more
Rapunzel24 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Whoah. 478 words, and I'm hooked! Also creeped out. But mostly hooked! Keep this on, quickly
coyg81 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Oooooh... Looking forward to seeing where this go's
DutchScorRosefan chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
I love your stories, how will this end or rather continue...

Poor, poor Hermione...

Ah not really, give it your best!
tenderheartinablender chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
peeing my pants. now im terrified and yet I want more!
Scaleybark chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Ooooooohhh! I do love a good horror! Aaaannndd just about everything you write...

meldz chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
I can see the horror aspect of this fic. How the romance would play in this will be interesting.
Sam Wallflower chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Holy crap... that was sad, terrifying and absolutely amazing.

I have to confess that this is not the kind of Dramione I usually enjoy, but... Wow! This was well written and disturbingly good...

Can't wait for more!

Lots of love,

LightofEvolution chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Oh, don't do that to me! You know I'm absolutely not into horror, it creeps me. But I can't resist your stories. It's dark and creepy, though I admire your way with words!
Happy Halloween!
kittybitt chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
I love it! I've always had a preference for darker stories, and I really enjoyed this, short as it is. Can't wait to see how you expand on it!
Sarah chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Can I get upset because you've labelled the fic as romance and then put a warning because of rape?
I mean, it doesn't make sense. If it's rape, then there isn't any romance (THERE'S NOTHING ROMANTIC IN RAPE). If it's romance, then rape shouldn't be present (at least with the main couple, or with the couple the romance is referring to).

Other than that, I enjoyed the fic. It was short and it made me squirm because of Draco's obvious craziness and Hermione's terror.


PS: When/If you expand it, is this going to be part of a Halloween roleplay between Draco and Hermione, in which case my earlier diatribe about rape would be useless seeing as all is consensual?
littlemissbreanne chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Always a pleasure reading your stories (: please continue!
sshanholtzer44 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
I was so excited to see a new story from you! I love your dramione stories. This is rather dark from you but i thought it was interesting. Great for halloween. :) can't wait to read more! 3
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