This was such an adorable kiddy fic! I loved it! And the parts where the kids think adults are weird. It’s so innocent and adorable.
Great job!

Poor Louis, I don't know but when I imagine him having to watch his parents kissing it feela in uncomfortable, poor him. At leat he got to the right thing. Merry Christmas!

At least Dottie has common sense (BTW this is awesome)

I had to step away from the screen and reevaluate my life at the "is that a really big present or are you just happy to see me" part.

Adorable. Louis cblocked his parents but it was still cute.

I loved it! Louis is so cute :)

This is sooooo cute

Oh, gods. This was great but I was just thinking about how I've been right in Louis' shoes when I was younger (and heard my parents smooch when I was half-asleep) and I accidentally punned in my head and now I'm mortified.

"I know how he feels because there's nothing more a-paw-ling than- oh my god I just punned."

Awe, too cute!

You're so sweet! Thanks so much for this cute little story!

Will they never learn? Hahaha love it! I especially love how they try to steer away the conversation.

Louis is the smart and brave one I swear. He actually went in and scolded them. Lol. I can imagine his siblings reaction.

Thank you and happy holidays!

This was cute. Also, those two are the most disgusting pair of humans to ever grace the species.

I thought this story couldn't get any better but you've done it! This is one of my absolutely favourite fics and now it gets a Christmas chapter! I think what I really love about this story is how you show adults "being weird" from kids' POV.
I love Santa Kitty so much, this was hilarious, and I am so happy that Louis wasn't so easily fooled. He learnt from his past mistake. But he still took that photo. I was almost crying with laughter by the last line.

LOL I really enjoyed this story the kids had such excellent characters. it was a blast to read.

Lol