Reviews for Writing History
LoZDCMVGfan chapter 7 . 1/21/2009
Okay I love the story but... sometimes you miss out words such as "I" and she/he or the person's name. Re-read your story out loud and you'll see what I mean. Apart from those mistakes that's the endgame ending I wanted.
StarGazer89 chapter 7 . 12/4/2004
nice. best one ive ever read!
AdventureBound chapter 7 . 5/23/2004
hey that was a great story i really loved it thanks for writing it oh and keep me posted on more fanfiction that your doing you can add me if you want or you can email me sometime thanx again xx
Raven Sage chapter 7 . 5/20/2003
Hehehehe, Emma... cute name

Coolio, upcoming sequel, i shall be waiting for it.
Raven Sage chapter 6 . 5/20/2003
I liked this chapter, poor Seven. Man, if i was Kathryn i would be realy mad at Chakotay... wasn't he the one who hated seven a few years ago?

Great chapter, going to read the next one...

(50 people in my house? HELL NO)
elfchick123 chapter 7 . 5/19/2003
Loved it! I can't wait until Correcting History comes out1 LOL
elfchick123 chapter 6 . 5/19/2003
thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u! I was waiting for that story for so long! Thanks for finishing it! LOL J/C rox!
DarkShadow1 chapter 7 . 5/18/2003
very very sweet. i liked it a lot.
DarkShadow1 chapter 5 . 4/29/2003
very good, im looking forward to the next part!
elfchick123 chapter 1 . 4/5/2003
Very good, keep wrighting more chapters.
Shadowwolf2371 chapter 5 . 3/24/2003
no! cruelity! newayz i love the story and cant wait for more to come

Raven Sage chapter 5 . 3/21/2003
hehehe, classic mind meld coolio

LOL Tom and the memories and Harry's back LOL

stretching it out is harder than it seems isn't it? Keep writing lol :)


From the crazy liberal who's reading ur stuff...
Eva aka Pinkfox chapter 4 . 3/4/2003
Great story. I loved True history and I am loving this. Are you also gonna write more to True History?

And in this story, will Katryn and Seven work things out?
Raven Sage chapter 3 . 2/21/2003
DUDE u r cru. el lol break it down so it sounds cool. by the way glad to see that you got rid of that awful review, that was just nasty. Besides the thing is deep but I'm to lazy to explain.. (hair equals everything KJ was before) so the person who reviewed was shallow and you don't want shallow reviewers by the way you should allow annoymus (i can't spell lol) people to review, you might get a few more hehe.


LOL I SHOULD KEEP GOING .l.o.l hehe bye
Raven Sage chapter 2 . 2/20/2003
Aw cute hehehe

still loving your story hehehe
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