Hi, this was amazing. I really liked your portrayal of Lucifer. You managed to drive the point home that he really isn't human and so has troubles to connect with them in certain situations
And it was also very well written from a technical point of view. Also appreciate somewhat low level of angst :)
As to the two different endings: I think the one where he became human works better for this story. It just makes more sense, fits better, its the obvious conclusion. But the one where he stayed immortal pleases the heart of a diehard fan :D So thank you for writing both of them. And thank you for this story.

I honestly prefer the second ending to the first though both are interesting. I'm really happy that he got his wings back.

Really nice job writing an epilogue that could fit both endings! A lovely final chapter. And this paragraph made me laugh out loud:

"You gotta admit, they make an unlikely pair," she pointed out, willing to give him the benefit of the doubt. "Like vanilla and… dark chocolate covered chili peppers."

So. Perfect.

I like both of the endings. They each have their merits. Thanks for sharing both with us! :)

This was a genius bit that nearly brought tears to my eyes. I had to re-read it to understand it, but as soon as I did, WOW. So beautiful:
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Her voice rose barely above a whisper. "What is heaven like?"

Lucifer regarded her quietly, his heart hammering powerfully inside his chest.

"Tough on the outside and soft on the inside," he told her, lacing his fingers through hers. "Frustratingly stubborn." His tired smile turned crooked. "Makes me vulnerable in so many ways…"

Really nice hook!

Chapter 2 gave me a good laugh. Reminding me of that one dream I had, where I was so bored, I decided to drop dead and become a ghost for the remainder of said dream. It really was hilarious. xD

Very nicely done!

You went in a few directions I haven’t seen in other Lucifer fic (particularly ending with the possibility that Lucifer becomes fully human; a lot of fics go the other way, making Chloe immortal in the end). You've also explored a few angles and character traits differently than I’ve seen elsewhere, which is thought-provoking. Thanks for it all.

Have you considered cross-posting this to other sites? I’m sure other readers would be interested. :)

I have really loved this story, including the side story and alternative endings. I will admit that I liked the angel wings ending more than the original, just left me feeling happier, but both were good and the epilogue worked well for both. Thank you for helping me pass a few more hours of lockdown.x

I started to read Lucifer fanfictions in February and I have read plenty of them by now. Still, this story is one of my favourites (including the M-rated chapter). Every part of it was brilliant: the storyline, the dreams, the emotions and especially the ending! In fact I liked both endings, but I slightly preferred Chapter 24. I think it reflects that every decision has its consequence; if we choose something we give up on other opportunities (we cannot have it all). I would be glad if the series had an ending like this.

I’m a little late to the Lucifer game, but that’s fine, because I CAN’T IMAGINE having to wait for updates to this fic! Man, do you nail their voices & the tone of the whole show. Those pure Lucifer snarky quips... Ugh, perfection. You plot like a pro. You are DAMN good. 3

What a well rounded story! I can’t say which option I like better, both are good and it really doesn’t matter if Lucifer turns out human or not. Well done!

Love it, but please check your Latin.
What you have copied translates to “we are asking for forgiveness” and not the imperative form.
Pete veniam would be better or roge veniam. The verb rogare implies “to beg on your knees” and is much stronger.

So far I like the story, building up nicely. Nonetheless, as having been to a Catholic middle school, the title Sister for a nun isn’t Hermana but Sor. Also, the sisters use the title with the first name of their choosing and not the given or family name. In case of Lucifer, being terribly formal, he’d probably use the Usted instead of the informal tú. (Even if he doesn’t with Chloe in the show.)

loved your story. I've only recently discovered Lucifer and this is a great AU to it. thanks for posting it.