|Reviews for Gipsy into the stars|
| Grammar Nazi chapter 1 . 2/27
Great story, but the grammar is shit. And use quotation marks when a certain character speaks, it gets very confusing and you even managed to spell ‘knees’ wrong.
| T. S.Smith chapter 1 . 12/17/2019
Now, I just have to applaud you for mixing two superbly different things, and making a fanfic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
Continue, but please work on the typing.
| Jaden chapter 1 . 10/30/2017
Can you continue the story
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
| headreviewer mk2 chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
| predator1701 chapter 1 . 11/20/2016
Just one Mis typed word, I've read other good ones with more than that, Great Job on both spelling and writing.
If you ever get a chance to update this please do so.
| Woods chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
So far so good. Liked how you started off. But grammer needs work, especially the dialogue. And add some more detail, other than that ill be waiting for the next chapter.