Reviews for Inoffensive Actions
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
one huge pile of shit and bullshit.

for what M&C did they would've been courts-martialled, Chegwidden forced into retirement and no doubt Mac would've received an award for coming on to ANOTHER OLDER CO. After all, whatever she did, no matter that it would land everyone else in LEavenworth for life she gets off scots free with an award for breaking regs.

You've made several mistakes: Harm was the one who constantly showed feelings for Mac, while she behaved like the Ice Queen Bitch who not only didn't love him, but hated him as her behaviour and words clearly showed. Paraguay. Pre-paraguay. Post-Paraguay. Brumby. The ring. The list goes on. And it's not distinguished.

As for Harm's comment: as rude as it was Harm's statement was true. Mac was recommended for Law School by the same man she was screwing. Either the recommendation was for the terrific lay she was or she gave her body as a payment for his recommendation as a payment, perhaps advance payment. Either way, Harm was right. Oh, to show Mac's character (or complete lack of it and of what little of it she had not being nice) she was screwing other men while she was married to Chris! But I guess you tend to ignore such things, as Macaroons are wont to do.

Also, Harm has hurt Mac, but he NEVER hurt her not in the severity nor in the frequency as SHE hurt HIM. And he ALWAYS apologized while Mac NEVER did.

Further more, we never saw Mac regret her screwing her boss, seeing as she started panting after another boss.

Right... Mac waiting on Harm... are you serious? Must be some really good liquor if you honestly believe that. After all... her engagement to Brumby and the affair with Webb ringing any bells?

Not very like a woman who is waiting on a specific man...
starryeyes10 chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
great story.
Swienegel chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Woah,

thats more than great! Thats the best short story Ive ever read! awsome! *remembertobreath* Wow!

Just great...

I love it really much, one of the best storys Ive ever read about AJ and Mac. Of course here doesnt happen so much its much enough to be happy, really happy for the both of the.

Its just so great!
FictionFan25 chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
you are a nasty person who thinks the Admiral and Mac should be together! EW! NEVER WRITE AGAIN!
bamaboy chapter 1 . 3/2/2003
no no no no no h/m
Aussie Army No.1 chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
this would have been ok if it werent 4 mac and aj together...sori...im a h/m person