Reviews for Dem Bones Dem, Dry Bones |
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![]() ![]() kinda weird the kakashi "look underneath the underneath" hatake got ambushed ? it was probably obito but the moment obito would go tangible i think his defense seals would trigger like a bomb lol |
![]() ![]() it would be funny if kimi also added some inuzuka face paint to his henge to make him kinda look like rin and kakashi's kid too really make obitos brain shutdown |
![]() ![]() would be cool if naruto learned some more sealing with his chakra he could hiraishin real easy around the world he could mail a hiraishin mark with a letter to the gang maybe salem could teach him some runes magic? or maybe salem could have some portal magic? |
![]() ![]() it would be cool if naruto and the gang made flying floating fortress cities |
![]() ![]() ![]() let Tenzo join the gang lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hound is Kakashi, who is bear? is it Itachi? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Kimimaro and Juugo, especially they decide to get from Konoha. Interesting! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't mind not straight MC, which is the norm in these kind of fanfictions. It's interesting how open minded the kids are LMAO. Thank you for the chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how it's not focusing on training all that much and politics when MC is young and have no power over themselves. Thank you for the chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally don't mind the age alteration. I hope the massacre isn't happening tho. Thank you for the chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've never read a Kimimaro MC or OC that is Kimimaro in that aspect. Which is a shame, because his Kekkei Genkai is absolutely awesome. The story delivered and I totally love it. I might start making one myself. Thank you so much for the chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame. I enjoyed this story very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should get rid of the random Japanese peppered throughout the fic. Keep the honorifics and the odd title, because they don't have a good English equivalent. But otherwise, you should remove them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate Zetsu and the whole Otsutsuki clan SO MUCH. |