Reviews for Dem Bones Dem, Dry Bones
Guest chapter 26 . 3/8
kinda weird the kakashi "look underneath the underneath" hatake got ambushed ?

it was probably obito but the moment obito would go tangible i think his defense seals would trigger like a bomb lol
Guest chapter 22 . 3/8
it would be funny if kimi also added some inuzuka face paint to his henge to make him kinda look like rin and kakashi's kid

too really make obitos brain shutdown
Guest chapter 22 . 3/8
would be cool if naruto learned some more sealing

with his chakra he could hiraishin real easy around the world

he could mail a hiraishin mark with a letter to the gang

maybe salem could teach him some runes magic? or maybe salem could have some portal magic?
Guest chapter 22 . 3/8
it would be cool if naruto and the gang made flying floating fortress cities
belphegorrr chapter 4 . 2/15
let Tenzo join the gang lol
belphegorrr chapter 1 . 2/15
Hound is Kakashi, who is bear? is it Itachi?
belphegorrr chapter 1 . 2/15
I love Kimimaro and Juugo, especially they decide to get from Konoha. Interesting!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12
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blueelvis28 chapter 9 . 2/9
I don't mind not straight MC, which is the norm in these kind of fanfictions. It's interesting how open minded the kids are LMAO. Thank you for the chapter :)
blueelvis28 chapter 8 . 2/9
I like how it's not focusing on training all that much and politics when MC is young and have no power over themselves. Thank you for the chapter :)
blueelvis28 chapter 7 . 2/9
Totally don't mind the age alteration. I hope the massacre isn't happening tho. Thank you for the chapter :)
blueelvis28 chapter 6 . 2/9
I've never read a Kimimaro MC or OC that is Kimimaro in that aspect. Which is a shame, because his Kekkei Genkai is absolutely awesome. The story delivered and I totally love it. I might start making one myself. Thank you so much for the chapter :)
Resurrection99 chapter 31 . 2/5
Shame. I enjoyed this story very much.
mickeysofine chapter 8 . 1/6
You should get rid of the random Japanese peppered throughout the fic.
Keep the honorifics and the odd title, because they don't have a good English equivalent.
But otherwise, you should remove them.
Foxy-Floof chapter 31 . 12/11/2021
I hate Zetsu and the whole Otsutsuki clan SO MUCH.
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