Reviews for Dem Bones Dem, Dry Bones
Snickering Fox chapter 4 . 12/24/2016
My favorite part... Everytime Kimimaro cursed. Its funny
BrotherCaptainSheperd chapter 4 . 12/6/2016
Love it... I hope you update soon and often. I also hope you got a good female/s options for your SI. Harem options would be interesting under the CRA, just saying. But if not then a good romance would complete everything you need in your fanfic (Coz if it wasn't already awesome)
Division11thug chapter 4 . 11/27/2016
Thank you for posting this, I love your story so much, it hurt. Finally, someone understand the need for SI badass character for Naruto fanfiction. I gotta give it to you though, this Kimimaru SI would be difficult for most author because his character is the one that (very possibly)got the most abuse out of life, and you manage to write him surviving more or less unscathed from mental trauma without SI being a Jackie joe( male version of Mary Sue or so I thought). Kimimaru and juugo deserves some loving and you give it to them. Your plot line has so much potential, though I feel like you're rushing thing quiet a bit. Your wording is precise( not exactly smooth) and a little ( just a little bit ) cut corner kind of way but have a stylish quirk of their own and I admire that. I think you have a bit of problem with spelling and grammar mistake, but overall you writing style is very satisfactory. ( this is not a flame, repeat this is not a flame). Also for your Christmas present, this is the moment that I like the most is the time when Kimimaru SI have the fight with Juugo, because this is the moment that he gave me the feeling of him being a human as well, and not just a character the author dump all the responsibility of taking care of his fellow character to. This is my most favourite moment of this story so far. As for the quote...:
" And it's so easy when you're eeevil,
this is the life you see,
the Devil tips his hat to me.

I do it all because I'm eeevil,
And I do it all for free:
Your tears are all the pay I'll ever need!..."
I like this one a lot, because it's like some kind of a hidden code only the SI knew, like an inside joke. Did you write this yourself? Or was it a song? If it is, what's it called? Who sing?
Cinder chapter 4 . 11/25/2016
KimimaroxTayuya ?
BlackDove WhiteDove chapter 4 . 11/26/2016
His entire speech of what he wants to do in the future.
Really just the "not in that order" part. XD that was great. Ooh ooh and his singing! Fantastic !
This fic is great, I really like it. I thank you for the recommendation fics :) mighty kind of you

Super excited to see more!
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 4 . 11/25/2016
BRILLIANT as always!
Don't forget that Jugo is basically a shapeshifter held back by imagination..
he probably doesn't need to have bending his arms backwards to strike behind him is probably possible...
wonder if, if he can get control over it, he can get creative?
caught up in a good book/comminung with nature?
create a lamprey/eel thing from your back that can do the eating for you!
want to catch Kimimaro a nice fish for dinner? grow gills and chase after it!
Kimimaru is thrown in the air off a cliff? jump off, grow wings/winglike growths, and use the jetpack thing!
mar888 chapter 4 . 11/25/2016
I enjoy the chapter, and the story.
blue-hart chapter 4 . 11/25/2016
i have something for you to think about we know jugo has NO control with his innate ability to absorb natural energy from his surroundings due to his unique bodies, but how about his normal chakra? that has not been touched upon for all we know he has perfect chakra control?

i bring this up because what if jugo became a Medical-nin? According to Yamato, medical ninjutsu uses either Yin or Yang Release.

so jugo is capable just something to think about.
Zaralann chapter 4 . 11/25/2016
QueenOfDirt chapter 3 . 11/17/2016
Okay, I love this, Juugo and the SI's personality are great. I also love how this doesn't feel cracky, even with the non-angsty approach. I'm kind of hoping there are more people made squeamish by his kekkei genkai, in a funny non-angsty way. I did think it was kind of weird that the ANBU were announced, it's usually all cloak and daggers, but I guess it's for plot purposes? Thanks for writing! I can't wait to read more :)
NecrorexSparda Juubi-No-Kishin chapter 3 . 11/17/2016
Has there been a SI with they having jiongu? In case you dont know what it is and it is a possibility cause i dont know your knowledge of naruto, but look up kakuzu,
blue-hart chapter 3 . 11/7/2016
need more i ship Kimimaro and Juugo.
TBear Archived chapter 3 . 11/7/2016
I don't really read much in the way of SI stories, but I decided to give this one a try for one reason. The title was really good. I'm glad I picked this story up as well. Not many good stories revolve around kimmimaro, which is honestly a shame. He is a very interesting hero.
Looking forward to future updates.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2016
Hey!, nice fic, i have to say that i really enjoy it :D
vampireharry the 2 chapter 3 . 11/5/2016
This is really cool! I can't wait for more!
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