Reviews for Dem Bones Dem, Dry Bones |
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![]() ![]() Thank you for posting this, I love your story so much, it hurt. Finally, someone understand the need for SI badass character for Naruto fanfiction. I gotta give it to you though, this Kimimaru SI would be difficult for most author because his character is the one that (very possibly)got the most abuse out of life, and you manage to write him surviving more or less unscathed from mental trauma without SI being a Jackie joe( male version of Mary Sue or so I thought). Kimimaru and juugo deserves some loving and you give it to them. Your plot line has so much potential, though I feel like you're rushing thing quiet a bit. Your wording is precise( not exactly smooth) and a little ( just a little bit ) cut corner kind of way but have a stylish quirk of their own and I admire that. I think you have a bit of problem with spelling and grammar mistake, but overall you writing style is very satisfactory. ( this is not a flame, repeat this is not a flame). Also for your Christmas present, this is the moment that I like the most is the time when Kimimaru SI have the fight with Juugo, because this is the moment that he gave me the feeling of him being a human as well, and not just a character the author dump all the responsibility of taking care of his fellow character to. This is my most favourite moment of this story so far. As for the quote...: " And it's so easy when you're eeevil, this is the life you see, the Devil tips his hat to me. I do it all because I'm eeevil, And I do it all for free: Your tears are all the pay I'll ever need!..." I like this one a lot, because it's like some kind of a hidden code only the SI knew, like an inside joke. Did you write this yourself? Or was it a song? If it is, what's it called? Who sing? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() CHRISTMAS PRESENT His entire speech of what he wants to do in the future. Really just the "not in that order" part. XD that was great. Ooh ooh and his singing! Fantastic ! END OF PRESENT This fic is great, I really like it. I thank you for the recommendation fics :) mighty kind of you Super excited to see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRILLIANT as always! Don't forget that Jugo is basically a shapeshifter held back by imagination.. he probably doesn't need to have bones...so bending his arms backwards to strike behind him is probably possible... wonder if, if he can get control over it, he can get creative? caught up in a good book/comminung with nature? create a lamprey/eel thing from your back that can do the eating for you! want to catch Kimimaro a nice fish for dinner? grow gills and chase after it! Kimimaru is thrown in the air off a cliff? jump off, grow wings/winglike growths, and use the jetpack thing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy the chapter, and the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have something for you to think about we know jugo has NO control with his innate ability to absorb natural energy from his surroundings due to his unique bodies, but how about his normal chakra? that has not been touched upon for all we know he has perfect chakra control? i bring this up because what if jugo became a Medical-nin? According to Yamato, medical ninjutsu uses either Yin or Yang Release. so jugo is capable just something to think about. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I love this, Juugo and the SI's personality are great. I also love how this doesn't feel cracky, even with the non-angsty approach. I'm kind of hoping there are more people made squeamish by his kekkei genkai, in a funny non-angsty way. I did think it was kind of weird that the ANBU were announced, it's usually all cloak and daggers, but I guess it's for plot purposes? Thanks for writing! I can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Has there been a SI with they having jiongu? In case you dont know what it is and it is a possibility cause i dont know your knowledge of naruto, but look up kakuzu, |
![]() ![]() ![]() need more i ship Kimimaro and Juugo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really read much in the way of SI stories, but I decided to give this one a try for one reason. The title was really good. I'm glad I picked this story up as well. Not many good stories revolve around kimmimaro, which is honestly a shame. He is a very interesting hero. Looking forward to future updates. |
![]() ![]() Hey!, nice fic, i have to say that i really enjoy it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really cool! I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great as usual |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! Omg |