Ya casi 2 años sin noticias de algún update espero que vuelva a sacar algún capítulo

I feel like this story's dead now
kind of a shame cos there ain't many shirou in remnant stories

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I didn't understand anything 'bout what happened.

Neat, so Cinder is Miyu here? Right hair, right hair colour, and right attitude for her, at least, combine with her recognition of Shirou Emiya, Miyu otherwise being MIA from official authorities and Ozpin's influence certainly points that direction. Maybe she reincarnated, maybe she wound up with Salem from the get-go, who knows? All in all, Miyu continues to have dogshit luck.

Really interesting idea though.

So... gonna guess Cinder is Miyu, Would be amusing.

Good chapter.

THAT'S more like it. Bitched about the faunus conflict before, but this is more than adequate. Good conflict, both sides have points, wide-reaching implications, no clear-cut answers or moral posturing.

Mm, this story suddenly turned much more... unilateral? The lack of an date of update notice at the bottom is telling.

"If I was able to fight as a swordsman, then" shouldn't this read "wasn't able", since he's changing tactics?
"She printed"
"She caster"
"went bed"

Kanshou is the left hand sword, usually. Though I do like that Shirou's starting out with just one sword, like Archer did in FSN. Sad how that never got used again, because it's a great mix up at the start of a fight.

Also, I don't think Shirou ever really refers to himself as a magus. At least not without qualifying it with a "third-rate" prefix. Specifically in the "as a magus"-way of thinking.

The reason the suicidal style is wrong is because there's a super simple super strong counter to it; feinting. A single feint can throw off the counter's rhythm and expose an over-extended action for an easy punishment. There's a reason why the "suicidal style" is only used in one scene in all of Fate, against a single opponent. It's not suitable for the vast majority of opponents, only those who blindly, immediately, without hesitation attack the first opening presented.

Pyrrha's also got a good match up against Shirou, since the reach of the spear and the wide defense of the shield completely shut down a single sword. Even dual wielding would be hard pressed to beat it normally. Nominally the answer would be Crane Wing Duplicate and nail her in the back with a thrown sword... but her magnetism makes that a delicate trick to pull off. Personally I would have thrown in an alternate material projection, something non-magnetic and throw her off her game, over a Key, really work that trickery and mind game angle, but if you're going for "he shed his facade"-thing, revealing more of himself to her than anyone else until now, then I suppose it's good.

"all weapons are call"
"by in my position"
"he ran of"

The whole faunus-Cardin-racism-bullying episode of RWBY was pretty awful and this isn't much better. It's to inconsistent. Out of class it's anything goes, but in class suddenly it's reprehensible and stamped down immediately. Which is it; a divise and controversial societal ail or a fringe idiocy?
Unless this is also a condemnation of the American school system, in which I understand this manner of hypocrisy is common. Regardless it's pretty painful reading. The lack of ironmanning the wrong side really hurts; just the idea that someone might think "these people would fight us even with the ever-present danger of Grimm? They're not even people, then!" as a source of discrimination should be obvious.
It doesn't help of course that RWBY's handling of the fauna is just awful in general, so you don't actually have much to work with in terms of a real and grounded conflict.

All twenty-seven circuits just to project Kanshou? A little overkill. I don't think that actually strengthens it in any way, either, as it's more a matter of accuracy than "power" when it comes to projection efficacy. Excepting bp, I mean.

A riposte is not a parry, it's a follow-up attack done following a parry.

Suicidal style is fanfic bullshit that reduces all of Emiya's swordsmanship to a single trick. For reference, it's not even an advanced trick, as in kendo, in the absolute first basic kata, it's taught as a concept. You're doing Shirou a disservice by pidgeonholing him like that.

I think I might have read the original version of this chapter, and it feels like an improvement, but can't be a 100% sure.

Points of note for corrections:
"how much work he huntsmen"
"fell sent"
"subtly" should be Subtlety
"They the"
"within my wanted"

Eh... The talk with Ruby was fine, good even. The argument with Weiss was pretty weak. But it fits, I guess. Rin ticks Shirou's Miyu-point, and EMIYA can't help but meddle when it comes to people he likes. I think it's because there's remnant of EMIYA equating Weiss to Rin, but unable to properly express itself.

Points of note for correction:
"something that girl"
"used a crutch
"great earnest" interest?
"finder"

I feel like Shirou shouldn't outright lie. It's more interesting when he tells half-truths. So instead of "assured that it was ok", he could have said "they haven't objected (yet)". This is both funny to read and suits EMIYA's brand of snark.

Color team names:
Prussian and Persian, tho they're both rather geological in meaning so maybe inappropriate for Remnant.

Any update?

Idc if I have to wait another year for this
I’ll be there!
This is too good to drop!
Oh my god I can’t even express my delight rereading this again