|Reviews for Paging Dr Swan|
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
Loved every single character in this one... What a great plot line! I do hope you continue
| moon shadow 31 chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
Love the story
| mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
Oh my I hope this one becomes a full story I would love to read more I love it thank you
| southernpur-rica chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
Love this and really hope to have more of it. Plus my son's name is Connor, true story.
| dazzleglo chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
So loved this hope you continue.
| moreno.cheryl37 chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
Not a real satisfying ending, unless,of course, you plan to continue it. Which would be great, I love mafiaward.
| Honeybeemeadows chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
Thank you for entering our contest!
| Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 11/12/2016
Quite a heart spark here
| shaz308 chapter 1 . 11/12/2016
Great entry, could really see this expanded into a full blown story, looking forward to reading more. Good luck with the contest.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
First story I've read for the contest.
I was hoping for something with a more Autumn feel to it, and not a hospital decorated for Halloween and a kid wanting to go T-orT'ing.
I was also hoping for something more stand-alone, rather than trying to get an audience built up for the story that [OBVIOUSLY] will be continued.
A few typos, but they aren't so bad. The ones that stands out the most are the first-person references of this third-person story:
"she kept my voice motherly;"
"a small nod my way in understanding." Was it a small nod in Bella's way? Edward's?
And Conner has blue eyes at first, then they're green.
Probably won't get my vote for the contest, but I may start reading it once it's continued. Edward seems like a negligent parent (therefore, unlikeable). But, maybe it's just what we've got from this intro.
| sfspeedy chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
Enjoyable read. I need more.
| twiclare chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
Now, we have to have more of this one!
| tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 1 . 11/6/2016
Great story! I hope you will continue after the contest ends
| EVK70 chapter 1 . 11/6/2016