Reviews for Elen Sila Lumenn Omentilmo |
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IMTrinity chapter 1 . 7/24/2004 Great first chapter! Please continue this fic, I can tell it will be an excellent one! |
Ithildin chapter 1 . 5/20/2003 I liked! pretty! More! wow, great english -_- |
Shadow41 chapter 1 . 4/2/2003 Please continue your story SOON ! It is really good and I want to know more ! |
Legolas19 chapter 1 . 2/23/2003 Very cool, I liked it! Update ASAP! Legolas |
SinNombre26 chapter 1 . 2/10/2003 hey, dont leave it off there, i realy wanna see what happens |
devilburns chapter 1 . 2/8/2003 nnnnooooooo! you stopped you need to carry on. please |
Angelline chapter 1 . 2/6/2003 Aww, dearest Earendil. (sorry, don't know how to do the little dotty stuff. ) So you've started on an A/L fic, huh? This first chapter is quite promising. I wonder what will happen next? It is quite interesting how you started off by having it seem Aragorn/Arwen. That makes us readers hope that it will change in the chapters to come. *hint hint* LOL. And yes, Aragorn will.. no.. MUST think that Legolas is MUCH more beautiful than Arwen, becuz he surely is, and we all know it. ;) I like that idea, and that plot. I think it would be interesting to watch Aragorn develop his feelings towards the blonde elf, but also struggle with his duties of being king in the future and the evenstar problem. I don't know why Arwen had to give that thing to him. It's like FORCING him to love her and be with her! *growls* Aragorn: But.. but.. Arwe.. Arwen: *shoves the evenstar into Aragorn's hand* Here, it's for you. You keep it. You belong to me. You come back to me. Or your conscience will eat you alive. *runs off before Aragorn can say anything else and doesn't appear until the end of the third book* Aragorn: *jaw drops open* Legolas: *snatches the stupid necklace from Aragorn's hand* Gimme that thing! *growls* What's this ugly thing? *eyes the evenstar with disgust* It's pointy! And sharp! You could get hurt! I'll give it back to her for you. *drags Aragorn towards their room* ~*~ Thanks for reviewing, please update soon, dearest. Love, EtheLeA~* |