Really sad chapter...the letter just made it worse
ugh i hope levi and linnea talk it out
hope you update soon!

Ah! choked up on this last chapter and dying for more. I came over after reading your DRRR fic and this one is just as terrific!
I spotted a few spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing that interrupted the flow of your writing (I only point it out in case you ever want to go back through chapters and edit). The characters though, my gosh you fit Linnea into the story so well, everything just seems natural and I love her development. But that note in this last chapter from Furlan, oh that has me so choked up. You sold him for me and now all I can wait for is how she handles Levi and his attitude in the future as compensation. I did also note a review someone had mentioned about disliking the sex in the story, pleeeeease ignore them, because not only did I enjoy Levi's dream, but Hange discussing sex and virginity with Linnea was just the best thing ever to read. It made me laugh and then all I could think about what how you planned to introduce her into that situation with Levi, which I look forward to. Anyway, I can't wait until you update this story too! I really love your work :)

Ahhhh! Keep adding more chapters! Pleeeeeeeaaaaassssseeeeee

So since I fell in love with your DRRR! fic, I figured I'd check out some of your other work - and you definitely did not disappoint. Your writing style is great, and your OC's are actually likeable, believable characters.

I need to know what happens update please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

Great story! Hope to read more soon :)

Very good ! I hope you'll update soon !

I started this, this morning and haven't been able to put it down! Wonderfully written original character, who shows growth and development and can stand on their own! Original plot line/origin story that lends itself to the character's involvement and gives her depth.
Can't wait to read more!

This is really good! Can't wait to see more :)

Amazing chapter! Can't wait for your next update!

So heartbreaking, so realistic. I would have done a stand-up applause if I wouldn't have looked like a complete moron. Please keep it coming, this fabric is my new poison.

i really liked this please update soon! the characters are so IN character, i love it

Such a great story! Characters are realistic and i am dying to read next chapter :)

Oh, this was really good! I really like how you've written Furlan and his little awkward interactions with Linnea; I never really considered him an interesting character to embellish but you've done it and written it very well, and it works. The dialogue between Linnea and Erwin at the end was brilliant, especially that ending; it did a really great job for showing the dinamic between them. And the last scene was very interesting and cool too. She's just getting shocks all around now ha. I feel like your dialogue has really improved and has become more natural and purposeful; some lines are REALLY hitting my hear. Also have to mention that awkward moment with Linnea interrupting Mobit and Evie, it was very well done! I like that's how Linnea and us - the readers - found out about the scouts relationship with sex. Kinda feel like I've repeated myself a bit from the last review - and normally I wait a few chapters and then say my collected thoughts - but this was so packed that I had to review!

Damn. That chapter with levi-s dream- really hot. Also makes his motivation of wanting to leave the underground city better. I like there was mention about sex but i hope its not going to be recurring sort of thing.
I also like erwin and linnea's relationship. He is basically someone she admires and trust. He has respect for her and her intelligence. They somehow work in symbiosis. Though i hope her and hange's relationship doesn't continue about sex. Maybe linnea could talk about technology she remembers from the books and gives hange some ideas.

also i like linnea kind nature. I guess she will show alot of that with eren. Maybe she can play a mother figure in the story. It could help bring good morale in the corps to have someone they can confide in.

Update soon