Rereading

Travis and Connor are NOT twins!

Percy X Hecate.

…I wonder what it could be…Perhaps a tournament? Also, this is Harry’s fourth year…hint, hint

I love this so much!

Dude! Luke was two years older than Thalia, and seven years older than Percy and Annabeth. He was 23 when he died, not 19!

It seems like this story is dead, and I'm sort of glad that's the case. It really feels like it went off the rails when the author decided to kill Fleur.
I can't really blame him too much. I don't really know of a good way to end this story, but the thing with Fleur and now Percy's vow to kill Pettigrew are just annoying.
Percy was always going to be overpowered in this story. Killing his girlfriend and then handicapping him by giving Voldemort power over him through his vow to kill Peter is such a hamfisted way of trying to balance his abilities.
What a disappointment.

Good story, but hat been updated in a year. RIP

I love this fanfic! Keep up the good work

Excellent, though perhaps less cuss words? I love the story already.

Awesome! A nice cliffhanger ending, plus, "oh you might have to fight a monster" Haha you have no idea

okay so I just have 1 comment that's critical, and even that's mostly funny to me. how do walls shit?

I read it straight through. Pretty good, as far as I'm concerned. Words flow well, holds my interest. Characters are young, and that is hard enough as it is. To keep them age appropriate.

I miss your stories I understand If you've moved on in your life, but you've had a massive impact on my life and I just want to thank you for all the amazing content and hours of happiness you've brought me. When I ever think of fanfic I think of your work as it's always some of the best stuff I've ever had the opportunity of reading.
Thanks

ah yes, what a lucky guy. I sure wish could touch unicorn snot. sorry for the hate love all your work I just couldn't resist