Reviews for Percy Jackson and the world of magic
dxlxtxd xccxxnt chapter 15 . 5/3
couldnt he just transform his wings and play some sort of angel demon thing?
dxlxtxd xccxxnt chapter 10 . 5/3
harry ron and hermione were in danger because of the deatheaters and he didnt realize it because he was fucking veelas? i mean...
dxlxtxd xccxxnt chapter 4 . 5/2
Lol that guest with his flame review seems quite dumb. He could have at least been factual instead of using curse words and then expecting to actually being taken seriously
dxlxtxd xccxxnt chapter 2 . 5/2
you wrote started to shit instead of started to shift and i found a couple other grammar mistakes as well, otherwise good work, pm me if you want them pointed out and cya
Guest chapter 32 . 5/2
Percy would never accept piers claim, and no farther would act like that after having his daughter brought back to life, shame on you! No person would hurt his daughter like that. Go do some psychology studying.
Guest chapter 34 . 5/2
Your sniveling coward version of Percy Jackson is embarrassing and quite frankly disgusting. I would recommend deeply thinking about what a person should accept when interacting with others and what a person shouldn't. You should also accept that that weakling mindset isn't acceptable when writing a bitter, spurned war veteran. Go think very deeply about all of that, feel the deep shame and start the fucking rewrite, retart!
Flumous chapter 34 . 5/1
Are you really boutta dissappear for another year? how disappointing
shadow7193 chapter 34 . 4/27
Awesome! Didn't expect another chapter rereading this story so love this!
Ryouhaku13 chapter 34 . 4/26
One of the best crossover fanfics of any fandom I have read in quite a while. Definitely top 10 material, and fleur/percy is holy, please don’t fuck it. Otherwise, it’s great to see that the latest update was actually in this year! Just finished binging all of the current 34 chapters, and good luck with any more to come!
juan.gar chapter 1 . 4/25
do you think you can add chanel to the relationship with percy? they saw that they connected a lot, Also when Fleur wakes up everything will be normal or are you going to continue tormenting percy with some weird shit like "fleur: w'o are you?" and so
Imperfect Demi-God chapter 10 . 4/25
What better way to move on than an orgy?
GenericPjoName chapter 19 . 4/25
Percy loves his friends, but he’s ruthless. He would’ve kidnapped them all and sent them to Hecate for infinite eternities of a spell of his own creation infinity worse than the Cruciatus Curse.
Guest chapter 29 . 4/25
Hmm... I don’t really like Fleur right now. I’m not really sure I like her for Percy either. I mean it’s up to you, but something about just doesn’t sit right with me. But I love the story overall
Avaline chapter 34 . 4/25
Please Update
Maybe Fleur waking up
The battle of Manhattan
Guest chapter 15 . 4/24
I love this!
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