Reviews for Percy Jackson and the world of magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really hope you come back to this! Love the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can already predict how the next daily prophet gonna be in next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought Percy just finished his OWL? why did he says he's still studying owl? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the story! Please, if you ever come back, finish it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting very good story looking forward to more if you ever continue it |
![]() ![]() So I take it that you have quit you have not updated i 3 years |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought you said witches and wizards could see through the mid with no problems and yet you had Percy use the mist to hide the bracelet he had on. You’re breaking your own story canon here. Trife |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well by your own story canon you just made another group of witches a wizards with their encounter with not just Percy but the hellhound and their fight. I’m curious how you’re going to deal with this situation you just created. Also, you really need a beta reader as this story is full of typos. Trife |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. Really liked this story. Please update soon and keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much has changed in the fandom sine this story came out that it is ripe for a fresh rewrite with new ideas and twists. It might even help get out of some of the corners Percy has been written into here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...So are you alive? Please say yes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome story. A few spelling errors ere and there. would love if the author continues/finishes it. |
![]() ![]() Why did this have to turn into a stupid teenage romance slice of life? It's Percy Jackson- Harry Potter crossover. Have him kill shit, it ain't that hard, Jesus. All you do is plan badly written romance plot, give Percy selective brain function, and go on a bipolar roller coaster between confident demi God and whimpering imbecile. Just pick a damn personality |
![]() ![]() PLEEEEASE SPELL CHECKK. The story is amazing otherwise . I loved it .i cant wait for you to return to it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Idea for the tonks percy romance , Pierre or what ever finds out about percy's visits and somehow fakes fluer's death and move to hide then percy devastated doesn't fight back because its her dad or just doesn't find them, then either harem route or give fluer memory loss to go tonks route, or just get nosey to kill fluer to get at percy as an example why not to cross him and join him insead to save his friends then no fluer and tonks route secured |