Reviews for Percy Jackson and the world of magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So random thought. Since Dudley is a child, and has encounter both Percy and a Hellhound, will he be able to use magic? |
![]() ![]() This shit is stupid |
![]() ![]() nahh mannnn why cant u put him in fucking gryfyndore cos thats where my whore percy belongs |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what happened to the spelling in this chapter? Hope it’s just a one time thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy New Year. Is good story. I love SmartPercy!. I'm a bit disappointed at Fleur's revival (because a single back from the dead cripples the value of death in any piece of media) I await the next chapter eagerly. Ciao~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished rereading this for the umpteenth time because it is one of my all-time favorite Percy Jackson/Harry Potter fics ever! You write Percy as such an amazingly powerful badass while at the same time including hilarious scenes that literally make me lol. Honestly, this fic and your other fic, Percy Jackson and the Game (which I plan to reread next), are the only reasons I still care about my FFNet account and not switch entirely to AO3. Here’s hoping you continue writing these fics someday! |
![]() ![]() I love this storyline and it is the only crossover I have read that is actually good. I have finished and hope to see you continue this. If you have no interest I would like to ask for permission to continue just for me privately. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Well poseidan would be one of the many aspects of the sea or water as there are other deities that have power over water in different pantheons |
![]() ![]() ![]() TFTC! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been an entertaining fic so far. I've always wondered why Demigods didn't make use of more magic, rather than just relying on their Godly parent's domain. Magic would grant them a much better chance for surviving to adulthood. Warding for their homes would give them a safe space and teleportation magic would give them to ability to escape situations that were too much for them to handle. Overall, I really want this story to be a lot more edgy. Percy is a war veteran of a long, bloody, protracted civil war where he fought other demigods. That hasn't really shown up in this fic. As the months go by, a veteran like Percy is going to look at the OOTP's operations and ask what the hell they're doing and why they're so reactionary. I think the oath angle with Pettigrew is interesting, but I read the wording of that oath closely. I really don't see how that oath means if anyone else kills Pettigrew, it kills him. I read it as more, if he's given the opportunity, with no timeline or time limit on it happening, he would kill Pettigrew by beheading him. It really walks the line of feeling like author fiat, a way to keep Percy out of canon HP events, rather than a real thing. Whatever happened with Percy using his future knowledge to make money? It was mentioned in one early chapter and never even thought of again. Rather than investing in the twin's joke shop, he should be pumping his extra cash into leveraging that future knowledge. OR just going into the sea and finding some long lost treasure ship that sunk in the 1600s and bringing up all that gold to put in his Gringott's account. I'm curious to see where things go, but now that Percy is older, now that there is a war on, I really would like to see a tone shift to something more serious. That cemetery scene, for example, should not have ended without at least one or two nameless death eaters being cleaved in two by riptide. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Being a curse breaker sounds like the exact opposite of a 9 to 5 job. It's breaking into old tombs, treasure, danger and excitement, which sounds like a badass Demigod quest to me. That whole argument felt off to me. I think Percy would love that. Adventure, magic, and money. That sounds awesome for Percy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() right, find this story quite fun, but i can not continue, the amount of spelling mistakes in chapter 32 and 33 just break the pase. i do hope you go back and fix it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank God Hecate convinced Percy to have fun with the veela cheerleaders. Seriously, he'd be in danger of having his man card revoked for something like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. I hope you update this at some point. It's really good and I have enjoyed reading it over the last few days. I got part way through and got to Percy inventing his hover board and realised that I had already read this fic but didn't remember it. It also didn't have as many chapters I don't think. It was definitely worth the reread anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cursing Percy: thumbs down. Comedic Hecate: thumbs up! I’m very conflicted One would think Zeus had a grudge against London with all the rain we get… So how aware is Hecate of Harry Potter and his future? |