|Reviews for Mojave Express, CC, New Vegas, NV 89155-1604|
| avaiaal chapter 15 . 2/10/2021
sorry, I ment chaoters 15 onwards have the formatting info in it, not chapter 18 onwards.
| avaiaal chapter 18 . 2/10/2021
I re read this story and enjoyed it, unfortunately chapters 18 onwards have all the formatting info in it, making it impossible to read.
| Mr.Nonsencical chapter 18 . 1/24/2021
Glad to see that this story is still going keep up the good work
| superpaganjew chapter 2 . 10/4/2019
I'ma be honest with you chief, I forgot that clarke was telling a story
| TwistedApron chapter 14 . 6/7/2018
Loved the chapter! Can't wait until the next one!
| ScrimshawPen chapter 14 . 6/3/2018
Well done! I think my favorite part about the recent chapters of your story is how much agency/POV you allot to Boone. The reader gets the feeling that Clarke is a decent person with a slightly screwy take on life ("chaotic good" alignment, if you like), and Boone is left to be the mournful, down-to-earth filter to process and reflect on the Courier's activities. This chapter is a great showcase of that role for him.
I like the scene where she takes care of him. The fact that he's in a place, mentally and emotionally, where he can be vulnerable with her is probably a good sign. He's moving on, little by little. Maybe there's hope for him yet.
I can't wait to see what you do with her background in the Divide. Keep it up!
| Randomness47 chapter 13 . 3/9/2018
I'm so glad you finally updated. I can't wait for the next update.
| ScrimshawPen chapter 13 . 3/9/2018
I sincerely enjoyed reading this today, whether it gets finished or not.
I'm so sorry for your loss. Wishing the best to you and your family at this time.
| ScrimshawPen chapter 11 . 3/9/2018
Awesome. Shoot Vulpes on the spot. Can't say I haven't done that in the game, but would never quite have the mojo to pull that off in the story. Good job playing out the consequences of that.
| ScrimshawPen chapter 8 . 3/9/2018
Do you know who my favorite companion in all of Fallout is? Arcade Gannon. I *love* platonic F!Courier/Arcade stories. But I also assumed - without ever questioning it - that he and Boone would get along very, very poorly. I'm so glad you thought so as well.
Huh, I guess she *should* have had a passport to deliver that package. Good catch.
I also liked the detail about the Hopeville postcard back a few chapters ago. She going to go back to the Divide sometime in this fic?
| ScrimshawPen chapter 5 . 3/9/2018
You are a *really* good writer, you know that? It's a pleasure and a surprise to encounter a fan fiction author with such a good command of language.
I like your revisitation of Goodsprings in this chapter, and the fleshing out of the people there. Poor Boone - he can't ever trust people en masse again.
| ScrimshawPen chapter 2 . 3/9/2018
I am really enjoying this so far! You've done a great job capturing Boone's character and I like your Courier - with all of her flaws and awkwardnesses - as well. The achronological ordering is also done well and keeps things interesting without getting confusing. I'm looking forward to catching up on the rest. :)
| Gabriel Herrol chapter 12 . 2/5/2018
OO boy, Boone has it bad! But it's a good thing. It make him feel human again and it help make him move on from Carla. Good chapter. :)
| Mr.Nonsencical chapter 11 . 2/2/2018
You font fucked up the format cant read it
| Randomness47 chapter 10 . 11/15/2017
That's all I've got to say just ... damn.