Reviews for Totally Off The Record
Pokemaster06 chapter 1 . 1/12
It's an amazing piece of work! No kidding! I am gonna check out everything you have written so far to understand this portion better! You know, it is implied that Misty has inferior part of herself in the anime, and very few authors are able to picture it properly. Many screw up. But reading the same thing from your end, added more realism to it. Because you made it sarcastic at certain points and narrated everything so precisely that I could not help but think that it was a speech from the anime itself. Great job!

And oh! That Alolan Vulpix did a great job of riling them. XD
hollylu84 chapter 1 . 11/12/2020
I loved this story! Though I would have liked to have read that they would have shared their 2nd kiss...I'm a nerd for anything mush!
IceCreamAndPizza chapter 1 . 1/13/2020
I admit I was waiting for them to kiss at the end, but regardless, I really enjoyed this story. I wish there were more stories like this. I like the real, imperfect Ash and Misty, and I feel this captured them both really well. It was really well written and I plan to read more of your stories.
IndianKnight chapter 1 . 1/10/2019
Oh my God! The conversation felt so real! I'm just lost of words. LoveLove ;P
Diana chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Continue this story, please! It's one of the best I've ever read.
Demostenes chapter 1 . 3/28/2018
This wole story was a pure gold :)
Anonymous1O1 chapter 1 . 2/13/2018
This was absolutely, undeniably fantastic. One of my favorite one-shots I've ever read. You should be very proud of yourself, since you made me love Misty even more. Their heartfelt midnight discussion was so honest and pure and beautiful. I smiled through the whole thing. Thank you for this.
ShipQueenCandy chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
Awwww, this is so sweet. Probably my favorite fanfic by far, just so cute and aaaa i don't even know anymore ! X/3 That mischievous vulpix is planning some big time stuff there...heh...

Loved how you wrote it, wouldn't change it at all. So cute and fwuff 3
Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
Soo cute
Harmonious Wolf chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
I. Love. This. So. Much. XD
A chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
Haha, cute.
PsyAnn chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
Oh my goodness! I am in LOVE with this story! You need to write more stories or a little follow up here for the on the record moment! this fic is soooo sweet! I can not praise you enough!
Mrs. Nose chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
That was one of the best oneshots I've ever read. Just the right amount of humor and romance, I love it XD

I love your interpretation of Ash and Misty's characters and the details, like how the school respects them because of their good deeds (which is kinda ironic considering Ash's confession later about being a fuck up).

I laughed at the underwear scene, Delia is one weird mom. I also laughed at their little spat about who should take the sleeping bag, especially when Ash said they'd just sit there all night. AND PIKACHU. That part where he starts narrating how warm the sleeping bag was almost killed me. Such a troll lol

I also love how sweet Ash was the entire time, confessing that Misty is the most beautiful girl in the world to him and that he'll never go anywhere without her. I laughed so much at how every guy that's ever paid attention to her is a jerk (I LOVE jealous Ash so, so much) XD

I can't believe Misty admitted she liked him during a rant (just kidding, of course I can) XD

Ash needs to man up. How long will he make her wait until he finally deems himself worthy? Doesn't he ever think that someone could steal her from him if he takes too long? o_o

Is that Vulpix gonna follow them from now on? That'd be hilarious XDD
Storm Dragon Wolf Princess chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
I love this and honestly I wish Misty would return to traveling with Ash. It might bring me back to watching the show. I loved the way the Vulpix acted and the way Pikachu thought of Ash and Misty being his humans. I also love how you had him refer to them as Pikapi and Pikachupi, not Ash and Misty. I also loved how Misty calls Ash Mr. Pokemon Master. It was one of my favorite nicknames for him but the show rarely used it. I also like how this referenced the movies... Well minus the first one but then again, Mewtwo erased their memories.
MandyQ Writes chapter 1 . 11/9/2016

Ahem. I'm really liking this Misty-never-left AU you've going - especially since you've used Aloha as a concession Ash makes to her so that she can chase her dreams too. More than anything, it's an indication of how they've grown up, and I would love to learn more about it.

The sleeping together was also really cute; although that must be one huge bag haha.
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