|Reviews for Mermaid out of Water|
| Merinus chapter 1 . 21h
Great story, very cute and very funny.
| Pokemaster06 chapter 1 . 12/20/2020
Haha I laughed my insides out you know? Good job!
| A Penguin chapter 5 . 7/20/2020
Congratulations. You have ignored the established anti-theft devices included in Pokeballs for no reason other than to ruin all our childhoods.
| Furny chapter 5 . 8/27/2019
Hilarious! Love it!
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/11/2019
The indigo leauge!?
| zdbztumble chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
This is a hilarious read, and a very successful effort at aging the characters up and dealing with more mature material without coming off as untrue to their personalities or the Pokemon world. Fantastic job.
| Acanthus Addams chapter 5 . 1/9/2019
Absolutely amazing. I can't tell you what a giddy smile I had on my face the whole time I was reading this. The descriptions are beautifully detailed and the characterisations of Ash and Misty are some of the best I've ever read on this site, and I really mean that. You should be incredibly proud of this story.
| IndianKnight chapter 5 . 12/12/2018
Oh sweet cheese crackers! That was amazing! Every chapter (Specially the third chapter) ;P! I was smiling like an idiot, You did a great job!
| Alphadelta-23 chapter 1 . 2/24/2018
Man, THAT WAS INSANE! I LOVE IT! I was laughing all the time I read the fic.. or at least there was a smile... You did an amazingly extraordinary work here... It's Awesome.. words aren't enough to describe it... Great work... Just, keep going with the amazing work and AAML stuff... All the best...
| Lightning Type chapter 5 . 2/8/2018
You wouldn't happen to have a spare stomach, would you? I busted mine laughing as I read this (in a sincere, totally positive way).
| AshPli chapter 5 . 8/3/2017
A really enjoyable fics with a really good blend of comedy and romance. I think I have re- read it about 5 times. Great work.
| Nami chapter 5 . 7/9/2017
I'm rereading this story cause I just love it so much!
I really hope you'll come back someday with more pokeshipping :)
| anjumstar chapter 5 . 6/26/2017
Let me just say, as an actor, the first three chapters of this brought back some pretty stressful nightmares I've had! Literally, I felt my heart clenching up whenever a line came up about how many minutes were left. Oh, I remember the one time I hyperventilated before a show because...well, you get it. You captured the stress. Very well.
That said, the first three chapters were definitely my favorites. They were pretty unique-some cliche moments, but definitely a unique take over all-and funny! I love my romantic comedy. There were nice dollops of clueless Ash and then Misty's embarrassment was rich. Although, I have to say, I've never met a zipper that couldn't be popped open. In fact, that's usually my problem when it comes to breaking zippers. Although, now that I think about it, there was one time I was stuck in a dress. The whole length of the zipper popped open, as I said, save for the top, which would not move down! I was stuck in that thing for a half an hour! That certainly would have added a degree of awkwardness to this, haha!
The last two chapters were a lot more typical for me. Particularly the last one. Definitely some cute stuff, but not really necessary. Everything that happened in that one was safely intuitive. Save for the Marill/Pikachu thing, which was fine. Although, I wasn't a fan of Pikachu's characterization in this over all. I feel like Pikachu's more of a buddy who gives Ash grief occasionally, but not endlessly.
Really, overall I kind of loved this story. There are things I would change about it, but I still think that it's really different from anything else I've read here, and that's saying something. I've read far too much PokeShipping in my day! The beginning of chapter 4 in particularly really made me laugh. Out loud. I'm definitely going to read this one a few times over.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2017
You should write more pokeshipping!
| pillows-attack-me chapter 5 . 3/22/2017
This was hilarious. Plot aside, I felt the real brilliance was with the banter between Ash and Misty in each chapter. It fits in well with their relationship when they were kids, but I liked how they had wittier comebacks now that they are older. Ash and Misty's reactions to each other are spectacular. Thanks for the read!