Reviews for New family
Calebros chapter 4 . 12/9
Please check your chapter before posting.
"By this point 's face had become" - A name is missing there. And this is just one of such issues.
Calebros chapter 1 . 12/9
So is Harry a vampire or not?
Smokeing chapter 7 . 10/14
Very good story look forward to updates
chloevogel31 chapter 7 . 8/20
please write some more it's a really good story
Silo666 chapter 7 . 8/4
cant wait to see more from this
Hikari Nova chapter 4 . 7/8
some grammar/spelling errors also you got the word hate in the wrong place near the end when Kahn is replying to Harry's introduction of him to Hermione
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 7/8
a couple of minor spelling/grammar errors but a nice chapter
candinaru25 chapter 7 . 7/3
i like this.
god of all chapter 7 . 7/3
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
WhiteElfElder chapter 7 . 7/3
So, Harry does not need a bloodstone, or is that something that will come up in time?
white collar black wolf chapter 7 . 7/3
Liked it
Azrael's Son chapter 6 . 6/22
please update soon i really like the story
Guest chapter 6 . 6/1
Please update soon again
WhiteElfElder chapter 6 . 5/22
So far there is a lot of good things...so I am waiting for the other shoe.
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 5/18
Is this before Selene took in the blood of Corvinus?
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