Reviews for A Broken Wizard and a Broken Magus
Argonaut986 chapter 6 . 12/25/2024
Gilgamesh FUBAR his way back to the throne of heroes.
Argonaut986 chapter 4 . 12/25/2024
That was an unexpected development.
Argonaut986 chapter 3 . 12/24/2024
What a way to go.
Argonaut986 chapter 2 . 12/24/2024
Is caster’s master a descendent of the Bathory family?
Argonaut986 chapter 1 . 12/24/2024
That is interesting.
ElementalMaster16 chapter 6 . 11/9/2023
This is a really cool story so far! Looking forward to seeing more!
poettckeroj chapter 5 . 4/29/2023
SAO Abridged, good taste
TheGrimDragon chapter 6 . 12/20/2022
More! More! More! Please continue this story.
mevizo2401 chapter 1 . 2/8/2022
mangoose, ever heard about the multiverse. you know the place where what could've been is, and what doesn't happen does.
Mangoose chapter 1 . 10/5/2021
Honestly, after having gone through so many Harry Potter crossovers, starting with a pre-Hogwarts Harry that hasn't even fought Voldemort is a dead-end for a story.

Why? Because the author will always end up making a Mary Sue due to the simple fact that they won't have an explanation as to why Harry becomes powerful.

Harry's journey through Hogwarts turns him into a heroic person who is motivated by his love for others to brave even the greatest of dangers. This also gives him the necessary knowledge to use magic. Now, without that journey, how is he supposed to become the Harry Potter we know?

He doesn't. Most Harry Potter crossovers share the same syndrome prevalent in Naruto fanfiction: Naruto-In-Name-Only. Or, in this case, Harry-Potter-In-Name-Only.

These characters carry the name but not the actual personality of the known character. It may as well be an OC-insert/OC-SI insert for all its worth.
Spellflame chapter 6 . 1/9/2021
Thank you
MawOfTheVoid chapter 6 . 12/15/2020
Great, love it. Hope for more
Guardian0205 chapter 1 . 8/26/2020
Please continu this story.
A Broken Wizard and a Broken Magus
Jacob Fritzsching chapter 6 . 7/26/2020
Please update your story soon!
Aramaki chapter 6 . 7/11/2020
Too bad this is so short. Much as I liked the original, this is actually far superior.
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