great story.
only disappointed that I hadn't discovered it sooner

OUCH.

Uh oh.

Well.
Hes a little too bold asking for stuff...

ºoº

Oh.
This cant be good... for the good guys.

This Imperial energy is like being a member of the Enclave, I like it

It is your story. Never apologize for the length of a chapter.

A soild 8 out of 10 if you had written smut it would gave been 10 out 10

Well I have to say I enjoyed reading this and I’m ok with how things turned out here. Thou I kinda wished we got to see more then a few segments in each chapter, like seeing more development and scenes with the characters and say seeing more of the boy aka William adapting and interacting with the SW galaxy and it’s people. Like seeing more of his relationship with his Twi’lek mistress and say seeing him in battles and what he did with that Rancor he requested but never really saw or heard mentioned again and so on

But still I enjoyed this and hope there will be a sequel to this or even get a rewrite with more materials added like the Bad Batch show and saw what happened to the clones here and if their fate is more or less the same or if it was changed

Nice work so far but Andor kind of disproved your point. Droids are technically more expensive than a slave labor force.

Man straight snitching right now and I'm loving and hating it.

Wonderfully done story! Will reread this again in the future. Love glassing Jakku and a few other tidbits you put in there. Thanks mate for posting it!

Your sentences are too long.

Sidious os ooc with the way he talks