Contment - if you ever have time consider running this through a word processor like Word Grammarly etc just to make your HS writing better. Again love the premise m

So while a few spelling mistakes (AN notably) were present you have me hooked with the topic. I do wish you did their first meeting better as it comes across like a talented high schooler writing. But while you’re talented I feel like Palpy reaction was a tad unrealistic and he would instantly attack someone as a rival but be sated by MC blurting out a fact that no one knows aka Byss as MC needs to seperate himself from Plaugueis.

I’d love to see naval battles :-) (especially if MC is an admiral)

Loving it solely based on C1

Beautiful, oh dear gorgeous. I enjoyed this very very much

I mean I agree with everything you say here. Take a look at the game theory videos on this. They are surprisingly in depth

Poggers yoda is dead

I like that its off-camera sex like if I want to see porn I am not gonna read it I am gonna go to a porn site

Hey a nitpick here but this is bothering me quite a bit: when finishing a quote,
It's :
"Hello."
Not :
"Hello".

At least it is where I come from. Idk if it's different in other countries

As someone who also supports the empire, - I can say with confidence - in both star wars and in real life that I dont think this whole democracy is gonna work out

Damn, I always liked Yoda becuase he looks and talks funny.
R.I.P. Yoda. His sacrifice will serve the Greater Good!

I always wanted to read stories where the prota supports the bad guys :D
This one looks promising so far.

Thanks!

Funny enough I kind of agree, the Empire wasn't entirely a bad thing. It just had a bad leader and I don't just mean because Palpatine was evil either. For what ever reason once he got into power his brains seemed to run out his ears and he made a lot of stupid moves. Like building multiple death stars for example... he already had complete control of the galaxy, why build a weapon strong enough to actually over throw his rule if some ambitious underling took over control the death star from him?

But in theory the Empire got things done and life on most imperial worlds was better than those on the Rim who lived at the whim of beings like the Huts. Sure there were races and classes being abused in the Empire but the Republic had those same issues as well with corrupt politicians and a government that basically did nothing.

In fact they didn't even have a standing military, so not entirely sure what the taxes actually went towards.

Palpatine be like: FUCKING P O G

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Very enjoyable.

Four robotic limbs could also be about General Grievous.