Reviews for Coby's Choice: Paradise |
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Jonpizzapasta chapter 1 . 10/11/2023 You know, I've tried to give this story a second chance. I really did. But between the unrealistic relationship of Luffy and Nami, to your explanation of how Logia Fruit work, not to mention the myriad grammatical and spelling errors, I'm beginning to understand why people say this is overrated |
monkeysrockdude chapter 39 . 10/4/2023 How could anyone skip the arc that gave us one of the most notorious criminals in the world Con D. Oriano |
magical fan18 chapter 21 . 8/13/2023 I thought Robin's Giganto attacks were TS only moves? |
Dini Jimenez chapter 1 . 7/21/2023 Is there a problem, If I decide to "read" your history in youtube? As in video content? |
zachplayz23 chapter 55 . 7/19/2023 Did Gin break the 4th wall |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/16/2023 It was pretty good but I just didn't like gin joining the crew |
tylerlane8 chapter 11 . 4/20/2023 how did we go from chapter 10 to chapter 34 |
Guest chapter 61 . 4/10/2023 I know it was established a couple chapters ago, I was the one who wrote that review saying it was a bad choice to not have ussopp separate from the crew temporarily, I take back what I said you pulled this off extremely well and I prefer this stories version better than the cannon version, I knew you were a good author, very good work here, paid off in the long run for sure |
Jonpizzapasta chapter 64 . 4/2/2023 Only one thing to say, and I'm sure you've likely been told this before, but Robin stopped referring to the Straw Hats with nicknames after Enies Lobby since she wasn't afraid to have that bond form anymore |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/27/2023 Should have read the reviews beforehand since I won’t be wasting my time reading this long story if you don’t even know how a LOGIA works lol yeah no chance am I reading a story where the author doesn’t even know One Piece. This story is just a copy and paste of cannon with minor additions. |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/27/2023 Not a fan of the Luffy Nami romance happening THIS fast. Ruins their entire dynamic. It would have been better if it was during the earliest Thriller Bark or Skypia. This is way too soon and idk if I even want to bother reading lol especially since I wanted to read about Cody being the MC… not everyone else and barely Cody. So far this story is extremely overrated |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/27/2023 Not a fan of Cody calling Zoro “sensei”. And I thought by now he would have SOME courage. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2023 Kind of surprised that this isn’t a more popular type of One Piece Fanfic. Cody has so much potential and as a character he should have more fanfics for him or as a self insert into him. |
Yohnos chapter 10 . 3/27/2023 You know, it's my personal belief that Tashigi is insane. You know who have a named blade? Shanks |
harsimransingh507 chapter 7 . 3/14/2023 Really like the story so far but devil fruit just doesn’t feel right for coby, maybe a paramecia but not zoan. |