Reviews for The Wizarding Chronicles : Return of the True Descendant |
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![]() ![]() ![]() And pray tell how daphne was imperioused at all with her being at home behind the wards? |
![]() ![]() ![]() If petigrew is this powerful what is the sense in bring voldemort back lmao this is the most oc shit i have ever seen of him like oh really petigrew can overpower you harry with all the training he has had not to mention petigrew was a rat for what 13 years? You make no sense the only reason i keep reading is to see what you do with harry and daphne or i would have dropped it like a hot coal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup you made your own character petigrew is not strong enough to do any of this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Peter petigrew was close to a squib due to his fear and never believing in himself just sayin. The petigrew in your story is mad oc |
![]() ![]() ![]() And pray tell why hermionie would be on the seventh floor and then disregard her idols dumbledores words of the dark arts and how they arent to be trusted in real lore so if you do something like this her parents gotta dies or something theres not catalyst for her to just say oh i wanna learnt the dark arts now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ill give it to you, you didnt drag out sirious getting freed like everyone else does like i was expecting i appologize |
![]() ![]() ![]() You make me not even want to read your trash ass story now why lead to this so you could drag it out? Starting to see shy its not a favorite of many |
![]() ![]() ![]() Author is evil no author is stupid yes severous is a lunatic in your story and i highly doubt he could have fooled dumbles for that long js |
![]() ![]() Where other stories like destiny and doom |
![]() ![]() ![]() He’s married to Slytherins portrait wuuur |
![]() ![]() ![]() Explosions theres so many explosions BIG EXPLOSIONS small explosions |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fluer and malfoy |
![]() ![]() ![]() GET NAKED RLLY LIKE NOT STRIP OR UNDRESS OMG THIS IS UGGG WHAT DO I EVEN lol this is friggin funny but stewpit at the same time omguh |
![]() ![]() one man's reality is another man's illusion." I wonder where you got thos from lmfao I love this line from Itachi lol. |
![]() ![]() The best plot i have ever read This is even better than "basilisk born" There is no time travel, harry is smart and cunning, powerful to boot Honestly, best ever fanfiction of Harry Potter Please continue your work |