Reviews for Before Beasts, There Was Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know that much about bey blade, but I have to say I'm starting to like Kai, at least the way you write him. I hope he kick some bad guys and gets a happy ending. You have added another fan to your beyblade fanfics! I look forward to how this might end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an Action! Love you Dranzer! Hey! This part was short... And again a Cliffhanger?! *sighs* Post the sequel soon. Till that, Happy New Year 2017! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh.. A cliffhanger! Update! This one was quite interesting though as compared to the previous chapter ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, don't mind... But there's not much I can say about this chapter... But yes, Kai and Tyson's conversation scene was interesting :) Anyways, Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha... I'd love to see the cold-hearted-covered-with-unbreakable-ice Kai sing in the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How often do you write to get so many stories out. Like, honestly, you're so on top of it, it seems. I don't read this story, but I get notifications for all of your stories because I follow you. Seriously, props to you. Good writing as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, First things first. A biiiig congratulations to you on your book :D I know it'd be a great success and if I found and opportunity I'll definitely like to read it :) Coming to the chapter, was that dream symbolising something bad? I have a feeling it was a bad omen. And Ayah spoke... Something which i wasn't expecting considering her throat. Hoping Boris to come in upcoming chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously, Ayah's ears are literally very sharp... She could even hear Kai's fears?! You know that part reminded me much about a Novel named DIVERGENT authored by VERONICA ROTH... :P Anyways, Update Soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another awesome chapter ! :) I found the last part quite funny by the way... KAI getting jealous like a girl around a love rival... :D And it seems Grandpa Granger too much desires to have a grand- daughter. But yes, I would like to know about Ayah's parents... Don't think I'm cruel but I feel as if Kai's hunches are gonna come true... Update soon ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say it was an interesting beginning which made sure that I'll be looking for the next chapters. I was literally clueless about the twist you were gonna introduce. Ayah has hollow bones and 3 vocal cords? Is she a superhuman or something? Whatever it is, sounds interesting. I'm waiting for the next chapter! Did I mention Tyson was hilarious here? |
![]() ![]() ![]() xD Honestly I found this chapter really funny because of the prequel events. Ray not being able to handle loud noises was probably my favorite part though. |