Reviews for A Pointed Difference
The Nachoman chapter 4 . 4/1/2017
As to your calculation of number of individual molecules, I believe that you needed to perform the calculation separately for each gas, then do the volume and percentages. But that's just nitpicking. I like your story so far, even if I have no idea where you want to go with it.
irnzenmonk chapter 4 . 3/11/2017
pretty good i like it.
goddragonking chapter 4 . 12/20/2016
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
Dur'id the Druid chapter 4 . 12/19/2016
Control sand within her range. Low budget Garra anyone?
Zooming Avid Reader chapter 1 . 12/12/2016
Please finish your Rabbit Ascending story. It was the best story about Naruto being Kaguya Otsutsuki's transmigrant that iv'e ever read. Please continue it. It brightened up my day when I was feeling sad.
Algor chapter 4 . 12/11/2016
There is, actually, a much easier way to find out how much moles there is in a given volume of gas with conditions close to normal. Can't say about USA, but in Russia schools teach the following method first. You get 22,4 liters of volume per 1 mol of gas - that's close to a constant for 0~25 Celsius and ~1 atmosphere of pressure.
drag00n001 chapter 4 . 11/25/2016
I wonder what else she can do she hasn't figured out yet.
She can grasp about a hundred sextillion distinct particles at their center of mass and manipulate them. Can she also grasp particles with no observable mass? Such as photons. If she can, then her power is Telekinesis at the level of Simurg-Lite AND dynakinesis at the level of Behemoth-Lite.

It also seems all dirt just falls off her. Does that mean that even confinement foam would just drop off her?
According to many legends, Unicorns are beings of purity, incapable of being sullied by any means, and capable of great healing. Most famous is their ability to cleanse poisons with just a touch of her horn. If she has an ability like that, then Panacea might get a collegue she can talk properly with.
I vaguely also remember some fiction / stories that imply a Unicorns running speed is near lightspeed.

Would her telekinesis range increase if she get's more experienced. If so, it's only a matter of time before she can 'LOLNope' anything below an Endbringer.
By now she can stop bullets in midair and shoot them back, while making it look she just tanked them and they reflected upon her skin/fur.
Juvart24 chapter 3 . 11/20/2016
Good to see her joining new wave most writers seem to think it's the wards or you have to be independent
Juvart24 chapter 4 . 11/20/2016
If nothing else sand and water can be a powerful defence it doesn't take much water to stop a bullet and sand if compacted enough can stop slot of blunt force
Colshan chapter 4 . 11/20/2016
I always love reading Worm fictions ever since I read the web series. This was really good.
Bobboky chapter 4 . 11/19/2016
very nice work
jdboss1 chapter 4 . 11/19/2016
I much say i lost on the calculations i just take your work on it

Nice update
Viva01 chapter 4 . 11/19/2016
Hmmm that could have some interesting effects
shugokage chapter 4 . 11/18/2016
Impressive job on this chapter!
Pietersielie chapter 4 . 11/18/2016
Thanks for a good chapter! The quality has improved markedly from first chapter up to this. :) Looking forward to future chapters.
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