Reviews for A Fake Hero
Ferdiad chapter 24 . 12/21/2021
WTF is up with Iri, is she powered by tantric magic or something now?
Axelm94 chapter 24 . 12/20/2021
I hope you continue this story it is very entertaining and I like the character interactions.
Anonymous chapter 24 . 12/17/2021
I really hope Ray O Neill has dropped this. I checked his Patreon and he doesn't have a triple digit amount of subscribers and money I think some of us need to go out of our way to support our favorite author. Provide motivation.
Guest chapter 24 . 12/13/2021
I have a strange vision of pouting Irisviel and Reiser doing dogeza in front of her begging for forgiveness for making her unhappy with him.
Guest chapter 24 . 12/4/2021
To charly22salazar, shut the fuck up.
charly22salazar chapter 18 . 12/3/2021
man... this shirou is so infuriating to read...
charly22salazar chapter 15 . 12/3/2021
man mc is lame in the fights
charly22salazar chapter 13 . 12/3/2021
man this is geting so long... how more chaps for this fight? 2, 3?
charly22salazar chapter 10 . 12/3/2021
Shirou has prana and demonic power? why does he not use demonic power?
charly22salazar chapter 8 . 12/3/2021
Man... all Shirous are horrible MC. Slow, dense and ignorant...
RegulusCetus chapter 18 . 12/2/2021
They are so god damn adorable
Saiyans4ever chapter 24 . 12/1/2021
Here is the challenge.

It is a Dragon Ball series and Senran Kagura crossover.

It is rated T to M.

The Genre is Adventure/Romance with Fantasy.

The Legendary Super Saiyans and the Shinobi: The World of the Story. Merge the Dragon Ball Multiverse with the Senran Kagura world with Universe 7 Earth merged with the Earth of Senran Kagura. Their are deviations from the original story.

First, the main characters are Broly and Goku. Goku is sent to Earth to conquer the planet after Broly was sent their in exile and they are the same age.

Second, all the Gods of Earth’s religions are real. When the Gods of Earth get involved they have all the abilities of all their legends, their pop culture counterparts and their various incarnations and the characters they inspired in pop culture. Their only weaknesses are the ones in their original religions and mythologies. They are as powerful from the viewpoint of the ancient cultures that worshiped them and can do anything imaginable with their spheres of influence but a creator or head deity of a religion is omnipotent.

The reason why many of the Gods of Earth are no longer active is because after the Age of Legends they developed a non interference policy on the mortal world and most of Earth’s pantheons have created their own universes outside of Zeno’s authority and the Gods of Earth have all ascended to a higher plane of existence beyond anything in Dragon Ball by mastering and perfecting the Magic of their religions and Dragon Ball Magic along with Ki, and God Ki.

The influence of the Gods of Earth being real applies to Kami's position is that the position of Guardian of Earth is that the Gods of Earth created to act as their emissary and ambassador to the Kai’s and Xeno. The Guardian is meant to be the protector of Earth but is still be mortal hence why their is more than one but they all have God Ki.

Third, Kibito, Shin and Old Kai are not the only surviving Supreme Kai’s of Universe 7. The Supreme Kai Avatars in Dragon Ball Heroes are here and are Shin’s juniors.

Bardock convinced the Saiyans of Freiza’s evil and there are enough survivors for the Universe Seven Saiyans to not be on the edge of extinction or to breed with other species to survive. The Saiyans reform and work on getting revenge on Freiza and free the planets under him. Namek is the final battle ground for the Saiyans against Freiza.

Bardock is a mixture of his original Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Super incarnations with his powers and character and seeks a new path forward for his race.

Finally, Nappa, Raditz, and Vegeta survive the Saiyan Saga and turn good.

The Legendary Super Saiyans and the Shinobi: Broly and Goku's adventures and powers.

Goku lands in Mount Pao and goes through the events of the original Dragon Ball up until the end of the World Martial Arts Tournament saga. For Broly's childhood have him be found and taken in by a Buddhist monastery and he is raised by monks and also becomes a Buddhist. Broly is his Dragon Ball Super incarnation.

Here is Broly's childhood. Broly loves working with animals and he admires the stories of Sun Wukong; The Monkey King but Broly has to wonder where he comes from, who he is, who his birth parents are, how he is so strong, why he has anger problems, and why he is so good at fighting, but hates having to hurt people.

Broly's guardians were honest with him and say that he was taken in but they do not know where he comes from and why he is so powerful and skilled but has anger problems. These questions will haunt Broly until he gets answers.

Broly adventures as a kid with his friends and family involve him understanding and seeing the world. First Broly meets the Tohno Tengu Shinobi and also he faces Sentient Yoma who want to control him and use Broly as a weapon.

Broly then meets his hero the Monkey King, Sun Wukong. The Monkey King becomes Broly's true mentor. Broly faces Sun Wukong's old enemies and Broly eventually has more adventures similar to Sun Wukong's(see the Lego Animated Series, Monkie Kid as inspiration).

Look at the Journey to The West Research Blog and also these people for research purposes. Journey to the West by Overly Sarcastic Productions. Ten Facts About Sun Wukong the Monkey King by ghostexorcist. The Monkey King by La Volpe and Anthony C. Yu's translation of Journey to The West.

Now for Broly's powers. Broly as a kid is a prodigy of combat like all Saiyans but Broly also has his canon power level of 10,000 as a baby and the healing factor of Z Era Broly and he discover's Z Era Broly's ability to survive planetary explosions and the depths of space and the standard Saiyan biology and abilities of his race such as the standard Oozaru form and Saiyan Power and Z Era Broly's Saiyan Power merged with DBS Broly's Saiyan Power.

Broly's Saiyan Power gives him the ability to increase his power level after healing from a fight but it can make Broly jump to new transformations from the experience and allows Broly sudden development in battle and the angrier Broly gets the stronger he gets.

Starting out Broly has a berserk fighting style that resembles adaptive wrestling. But Broly is not like most Saiyans. Broly is afraid of hurting or worse killing someone and losing control of his anger so he trains in martial arts and meditation to control his strength and discipline his mind.

Broly like all Saiyans is a prodigy of combat he ends up mastering the Tiger, Monkey, Crane, Snake, Leopard, Mantis, and the two Dragon styles of the Shaolin Animal styles of Kung Fu.

Their are two variants of Dragon style martial arts. Broly learns both North and South Dragon Styles.

South Dragon Style is a mashup of the various animal styles which Broly learns. Students work on a paired striking blocking exercise and practice various form techniques. Northern Dragon Style is different.

Northern Dragon style teaches students to stay firmly rooted on the ground, and with good reason. Being grounded to the earth allows the generation of power from the feet on up. What this means is that as an art firmly rooted in the earth the main physical concern is building up the strength and endurance in the legs and core muscles that will allow you to maintain a stance for long periods of time. Its a practice. Anyone can do it given the commitment to the practice.

Broly also learns two more styles of Chinese Kung Fu: Tai Tzu and Lui He. Broly also learns the martial arts disciplines of Akido, Judo, and Taekwondo. Their is an actual martial arts style called Shotokan Karate which Broly learns. Shotokan Karate was inspired by the fighting style of Bushido and Zen Buddhism. Bushido is not just a philosophy but also a fighting style of The Samurai and Shotokhan Karate did not originate in Street Fighter.

Broly hoping that he has mastered himself seeks to test his skills at the Tenkaichi Budokai. That is where Goku and Broly meet and become friends and ignite a friendly rivalry before things get crazy. Goku and Broly both transform into Oozaru during the finals of the Tenkaichi Budokai and Broly wins the whole tournament.

Realizing the bullet that was dodged Broly and Goku are told what happened. Broly realizes the damage he can do decides to keep his tail and work to master the primal powers within him while on his path to Enlightenment. Goku realizes what happened to his grandpa and to atone keeps his tail to master the powers within him and eventually becomes the super heroic version in the original English dub.

Broly when he meets Sun Wukong learns old Taoist and Buddhist magic's and gains some more Enlightenment Super Powers to try and master himself and Broly must work to get it as he is no prodigy of magic or of the Sixfold Path to Enlightenment. Broly gains most of Sun Wukong's powers from the Journey To The West novel aside from Sun Wukong's immortality and gain control of the energies of Yin and Yang but Broly is no Ninja, along with what Broly gets later.

After his training with Sun Wukong is finished Broly still has to find away to better control his strength and anger. When the kids become teenagers that is where things get crazy. When the next Tenkaichi Budokai happens Broly wins the tournament but the King Piccolo Saga begins.

Goku and Broly face down King Piccolo's spawn and King Piccolo himself and this gets the entire world interested in them. Broly after the King Piccolo Saga tries to leave the spotlight but accidentally gets involved with Hanzo Academy and the other ninja groups and their exploits with Broly and Goku shaking things up. Goku when training with Kami shows up and gives Broly the news that Piccolo has surviving offspring and also to meet new strong people.

Then comes the Piccolo Junior Saga. After Broly helps out the Ninja Girls with their problems he goes back to The Tenkaichi Budokai to help face Piccolo Jr and another rematch between the two of them.

When you go into Broly's adult life in Dragon Ball Z you must give him the the transformations of Z Era Broly and some of the ones he had in Dragon Ball Super in Dragon Ball Z, and Broly gets more abilities from Dragon Ball Z. That includes all the official Super Saiyan transformations his Dragon Ball Z Era self had from some of the games and the sheer power he had in Dragon Ball Super.

Broly becomes more of a beast then in cannon when he develops all the abilities and techniques of his Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Super incarnations but Broly gets more abilities from Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Super.

In Dragon Ball Z Broly's Saiyan transformations are Oozaru, the Wrathful Form, Pseudo Super Saiyan, Super Saiyan, Super Saiyan Second Grade, Super Saiyan Third Grade, Super Saiyan Full Power, Super Saiyan A-type, Super Saiyan C-type, Super Saiyan 2, Super Saiyan 3, Super Saiyan 3 Full Power, Legendary Super Saiyan, Legendary Super Saiyan 2, Legendary Super Saiyan 3, Golden Oozaru, Oozaru Broly, Super Saiyan 4, Super Full Power Saiyan 4, Super Full Power Saiyan 4 Limit Breaker.

In Dragon Ball Super Broly gets Super Saiyan God, Super Saiyan with the mastered energies of a god, Super Saiyan Blue, Super Saiyan Blue Perfected and when Broly masters his anger he gains and perfects the last transformation of Z Era Broly, Broly God.

When Goku and Broly become adults in Dragon Ball Z you must go into an altered version of Dragon Ball Z as Bardock and Paragus are the ones who kick off the Saiyan Saga who want to both bond with their sons and also recruit them to fight for the reformed Saiyans against Freiza. But Paragus also wants to use Broly's strength to get revenge and rule the Saiyans.

After the Saiyan Saga things get crazier. Goku and Broly have to face their heritage in the Namek Saga especially after they find out their are other Saiyans who are trying to turn good and repent for their mistakes.

The start of the Namek Saga is like canon but it gets crazier as the Ninjas and Z Fighters help the Saiyans and Namekians. Also Goku and Broly both go Super Saiyan against Freiza in the final battle.

During the Android Saga they have to face the past and even stronger opponents.

In the Buu Saga Goku and Broly’s arc dealing with the beast within comes to a close. Goku and Broly learn about Super Sayian 4 from Old Kai but to master it they have to go back to basics.

Broly first must fully master the Wrathful Form and the Pseudo Super Saiyan forms. Broly and Goku both have to master The Oozaru, Super Sayian 3, and The Golden Oozaru forms. Broly must also master Legendary Super Saiyan 3 and Oozaru Broly forms.

Finally Goku and Broly gain and master Super Sayian 4, Super Full Power Sayian 4 and both master Super Full Power Sayian 4 Limit Breaker to destroy Kid Buu and save the universe.

Broly's character development and story arcs are him learning what he can do, control his strength, knowing when to hold back his strength and control his anger, find out where he comes from, who he is, accept and overcome the beast within and also be a good parent.

Despite all this power Broly still has weaknesses. Broly's tail can still be grabbed and it causes Broly incredible pain. Even if Broly strengthens his tail it can still be grabbed. Also each of Broly's Dragon Ball Z Era's transformations are scaled to fit Dragon Ball Super Broly. Broly has to hold himself back more than normal and they are last resorts that could cause him to destroy reality.

And the Super Saiyan 4 Transformations risk Broly turning violent and even more angry so he has to master those forms violent impulses and this applies to Broly's Wrathful Form. Broly's berserk states can leave him vulnerable to opponents just as strong but more skilled. Broly in his Legendary Super Saiyan forms has to burn out some of his energy or risk self destruction. So Broly must learn to control his anger and his unstable and endless energy.

Broly has to be aware of what he can do to others and to the world if he loses control so Broly constantly holds back even to his detriment unless he is somewhere that can handle his power, meets a challenger who can take it, or if Broly is fighting pure evil. Broly must be terrified of losing control of himself or hurting people fearing that he may turn into a monster.

In Dragon Ball Super Broly eventually masters himself, his powers, and conquer his inner demons. When Broly does that he finally finds Inner Peace and Greater Enlightenment and have full control of himself.

See Hulk VS Broly(Marvel VS Dragon Ball)DEATH BATTLE! as a template for Broly's abilities.

Broly is not the only one who gets stronger. Son Goku at the start of the story is as strong as he is in Dragon Ball: The Path to Power movie and because of his harder work effort Son Goku gets everything he has officially across the entire Dragon Ball Franchise.

When Raditz turns good he reaches Super Saiyan, Super Saiyan 2, Super Saiyan 3, and Super Saiyan 4, Super Full Power Saiyan 4, Super Saiyan Blue and Super Saiyan Blue Perfected.

When Nappa turns good he eventually gets Super Saiyan, Super Saiyan 2, and Super Saiyan 3.

Vegeta also gets everything he has officially from across the Dragon Ball franchise.

The Senran Kagura cast have all their cannon powers but get stronger. Some of the Ninja Girls train under Master Roshi, The Crane Hermit, Korin, Mister Popo, Kami, King Kai, and the Z Fighters. They also have their potential unlocked. Some by drinking The Ultra Divine Water and survive, others by Grand Elder Guru and some go through the ritual of Old Kai to unleash their potential.

The Legendary Super Saiyan and the Shinobi: Parings.

Broly gets a harem or girls but only when he has it spelled out to him because Broly as a young man is clueless with love. When Broly finds out the girls love him Broly falls in love and eventually has children with Katsuragi, Hikage, Murasaki, Murakumo, Daidouji, Suzune/Rin, Hibari, Haruka, and Cheelai.

Goku gets with Chichi but Goku unknowingly at first also wins the affections of Asuka, Homura, Shiki and Ikaruga and after Goku realizes he loves them Goku has kids with all of them.

Raditz gets with Launch and has kids with her.

Krillin gets with Android 18 and has a daughter with her and Android 17 finds a wife from one the Senran Kagura girls and has kids with her and Android 17 also adopts the Cell Juniors like in the Dragon Ball Super Manga.

Yamcha gets with one of the Tohno Tengu Shinobi girls.

Vegeta gets with Bulma and has kids with her.

The Legendary Super Saiyan and The Shinobi: Ending and Epilogue.

After Broly, Goku, Nappa, Raditz, Vegeta, and Earth's Warriors fight and win the Tournament of Power and some of the events in the Dragon Ball Super Manga afterwords a time skip happens and the events of Dragon Ball GT play out altered and certain concepts are expanded on. The team gathers the Red Star Dragon Balls because the Pilaf Gang made a wish on them. Also since the heroes overused Earth’s Dragon Balls the Shadow Dragons are born and rampage across the Earth and create a rift connecting Earth to Hell furthering the damages.

After Broly, Goku and their companions defeat the Shadow Dragons, Goku has to leave Earth with Shenron to prevent people from relying on the Dragon Balls until Earth can stand on its own. When Goku leaves he, Earth's Dragon Balls and Shenron ascend to a higher plane of existence and Goku gains all the powers of Hanuman and Sun Wukong. Son Goku evolves into something more than a Supreme Kai, God of Destruction, or a Super Saiyan God.

To help Earth evolve Krillin and Tien bring back the Turtle and Crane Schools of Martial Arts, Gohan when he grows up writes the Ki Manuel’s from Dragon Ball Online and the Senran Kagura girls also open their own martial arts and ninja schools.

Piccolo goes to New Namek and trains his species in his fighting style and also to reach his power level.

Broly also decides to teach the next generation of heroes to protect the universe.

Broly gathers the Saiyans on Earth to train the next generation of heroes. Broly, Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz open their own martial arts school on Earth with what they know with Ki and their techniques as their teachings and they also go to New Planet Vegata to teach the Saiyans.

On Planet New Vegeta, Prince Vegeta teaches strategy, Raditz teaches how to use the battlefield and take advantage of chance and to survive the fight and also teach his various techniques and Ki control, Nappa teaches how to use raw force and when to cut loose.

Broly when he masters himself trains the Saiyan Warriors to master the Oozaru forms, The non Legendary Super Saiyan forms and Super Saiyan 4 and all it's variants and teaches them to control their strength.

Broly also teaches the Saiyans the martial arts techniques, the fighting styles he learned and the Martial Arts philosophies. Broly also teaches the entire Saiyan race Taoist mysticism, philosophy, and culture alongside the martial arts. Broly also teaches the entire Saiyan race Buddhist Mysticism, philosophy, and brings Buddhist culture to the Saiyans to help them find Enlightenment and teaches them to control their strength.

Broly also trains Shin's Juniors to reach Super Saiyan Blue levels of Power.

Goku and Broly's legacy is something special as they are given proper credit.

Goku and Broly became the youngest martial artists to become finalists in The Tenkaichi Budokai. When Goku and Broly face down King Piccolo and his spawn it was recorded and they get interviewed when Goku let slip that he destroyed the Red Ribbon Army. Broly was the youngest World Martial Arts Champion in Earth's history and a two time World Martial Arts Champion and only lost a fight once in his professional career. Broly is one of the heroes who slayed King Piccolo and helped slay Super Perfect Cell.

In the Senran Kagura arcs Broly was the one who killed The First Yoma and a lot of powerful and sentient Yoma and The Shinobi world owe Broly and Goku as they both killed Orochi.

To the Saiyans Goku is one of the best of their race and the son of the Saiyans Prophet and leader Bardock. Goku is one of the Super Saiyans who saved their race and the Namekians. Broly is seen as the Saiyans version of The Messiah and The Buddha whom along with Bardock showed them the way to be better. To the multiverse at large Goku and Broly are seen as heroes.

When Broly is done with his work in the living world he ascends to a higher plane of existence and evolves into what Goku became.

To quote The Buddha "It is better to conquer yourself, than to win a thousand battle's, It cannot be taken from you. Not by angel's or demons, heaven or hell".

That is the Legacy of The Legendary Super Saiyans.
Saiyans4ever chapter 24 . 12/1/2021
Oh this is going to be fun. I love this story as it is both funny and also heartwarming as I love the fact that Shirou has a family, and he has to also be a pillar of moral support at times. Also Iri is just a riot who is hilarious.

Now I am going to send you a challenge that I saved from deletion and I think you have the talent to pull it off.
JumpingToaster chapter 3 . 11/29/2021
Story seems nice so far. I initially dropped it immediately a while back when I first encountered it because I got annoyed at despite having a new premise Shirou ended up dying and get resurrected with the pieces. The reason for THAT is at the time I got sick and tired of a number of fics from different franchises where despite setting things up to be quite different and despite events diverging from the canon same/similar stuff happens anyway. Not that I am saying it is necessarily bad by itself but at the time I was tired of it all.

But again, so far so good.
Guest chapter 24 . 11/21/2021
Can you please update. My soul needs to see the next chapter of this fic.
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